Wednesday 26 May 2010

DEENA SKET CHAPTER 64 and 65

I looked up at Adam.
he fell on his back next to me, my pussy hurt so much, i didnt say anythin,
"why did u hurt me,"
"what"
"why did u hit me?".
"i told u i was sorry,"
"then why did u do it again,"
"i only did it once," he said getting up.
I got up slowly and looked at him.
He couldnt look at my face, even though the bruises werent that obvious from eveything that had happened the night before, the swellin was there. "Ive got HIV," I said.
He stared at me and slowly shook his head.
"And you just fucked me bareback," i said.
His eyes started to water up.
"You're lying,"
"Where did you ask the cab to pick me up from- a hospital, why do u think i was there,".

He said, "you're chattin shit."
"Ive got HIV," i said. "I bet you wished you used a rubber now"
He went to punch me but then stopped, "you're lyin, show me the results."
I pointed at my pussy, "this is the result,"
He screamed and grabbed hold of my neck, "what good is fuckin me up gonna do- im fucked up as it its," i said.
"you're chattin shit," he said walking backwards awayfrom me.
Then i noticed something, there were two suitcases underneath the window.

There was a passport and two airline tickets on the desk next to me
"You're tryna run away," i said, "before the feds start to ask you questions about ryan,"
He went to come near me but i picked the passport up, "ill tear out every single page if u come any closer,"
I picked up the airline tickets and realized they weren't airline tickets, they were Eurostar.
I opened them.
There was one for Adam and one for..


Me.




CHAPTER 65
I picked up the second passport I looked closely at the pic, it had my name on the picture. But Sorchas face.
"What the FUCK IS THIS,!" I screamed.
He gave me a blank stare like say I had just told him Roll Deep that if you took the chorus out of Roll Deep's new song, the song would slip down the charts faster than you can say "Channel Aka".
"You and that bitch," i said, "you're running away- together, tryin to use my identity."
He went to come close to me but i said, "come any closer and ill tear that shit up,"
he backed away.
"You wanna try and get away from what uve done, from killing my man,".
"IT WAS SMURKZ."
"Oh i aint worried about Smurkz," i said, "he was nabbed this morning, drug raid."
Adam looked horrified, "so is sorcha on her way den," i asked.
He didnt say anythin.
"If u dont answer me, ill tear it up," i said.
"ur chattin shit about the hiv," he said.
"maybe i am, either way im not lettin u duss from what uve done, and that bosh too, is she on her way,"
"shes meeting me at st pancras in two hours," he said.

"So she's gonna leave her maj to go france wiv u, why u scared," i said.
"cos i cant go pen for what me sorcha and smurkz did,"

"and now you know smurkz will snitch cos ive just told u the feds have got him, so now these tickets mean more than what they did five minutes ago and that bosh is tryin to use my name to get out of the country yeah?," i said.
"Please Deena, let me go," he said startin to cry, "u hated ryan yourself."

"SHUT UP,"
"He fucked u up, sorcha told me how he didnt even care when u got raped by jesse and faisani, how he's the reason you had a miscarriage and ur angry at someone for duppying him after all he did to you," Adam shouted.

"He loved me,"
"There's tings u dont know about him, Deena, tings that he did."

"Like what, how would you know, you - you only saw him once,"
"There's shit that he did that you dont know about, that Sorcha doesnt even know about,"

"Tell me then you fassy- tell me what you know!".




"HE KILLED DIANE!".

47 comments:

  1. Awwww Adam! He wanted to take her away.

    I actually don't know how to feel about him lol. Excellent writing again :)

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  2. ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo -gaspgaspgasp.

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  3. OMG Noo.. Denna Fuked up with Adam now boii.

    I wonder what gona happen next.

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  4. This chapter is soooo short! I must have checked this at least 30 times yesterday for the new chapter then its finally up n its over in less that a minute :/
    But anyway... Why's adam got a eurostar tickets for deena as well?? I don't get it, why did he wana run away with her? :S

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  5. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH DIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANE!

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  6. nah but sorcha needs to die for real tho
    and as for adam..
    kmt
    deena mayyy be a skeezer but how can u try steal her identity
    poor girl is gettin parred left right and centre
    laardd!

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  7. I cant even remember who Diane is.. who is she?

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  8. Oh my gosh I hadn't read the next chapter! Adam... Yeah I don't like him.

    Ryan killed Diane? By setting her up maybe?

    Poor Deena!

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  9. Adam doesn't want to runaway with deena he is running away with sorcha..their using deena's name and stuff on the passport/ticket but it as sorcha picture on it. so sorcha and adam r runing away together, i guess he probably does luv sorcha or somthing.

    The begining bit is deep the way she just said she as HIV emagine how he must feel..i'll be surprised if she didnt have HIV cos she's gone bareback so many times.

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  10. Does anyone remember when Sorcha went to Adams house to see Deena but Deena didnt want to seeher and then ryan was outside to pick Sorcha up? Well do you remember Adam telling Deena that Sorcha was the sexiest girl he'd ever seen, he was checkin for Sorcha from day one and now he must love her lmao, and Sorcha is fraudulent with acapital F, how is she gonna try and use Deenas name to leave the country LMAO.
    SKET, DRUG, DEALER, FRAUD and my girl is only 19.
    oh and diane, SHIT! why did ryan do that, he mustve set her up OH MY FUCKIN GOSH- OH MY FUCKIN GOSH- ryan must have wanted sorcha AND diane dead because sorcha and diane were both meant to into the house, thats probably why ryan acted as though he didnt care that sorcha might have been dead.

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  11. Its not for Deena - it has Sorcha's picture because she's trying to steal her identity!

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  12. ooooh yeah, do u remeber how he reacted when he found out that diane was dead, he left the house leaving deena by herself, but what i want to know is dis, if murda is the one who sent sorcha and diane to the house to shot the dro how did ryan get in contact with the people they were goin to be shottin to tell them to duppy diane AND sorcha.

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  13. to the above comment, dont forget that ryan used and fumez used to run the clique that Murda and Damon now run so they would have the same contacts, if ryan knew who diane and sorcha were goin to shot to and if he knew they were on killin people then it wouldnt have been hard for him to set it up- now i just wanna know why.


    Deena is slowly becoming appealing to me as a character, i used to hate her, want to punch her and sometimes wanna hug her but im really feelin her swagger, im just imaginin how she went from being looking like some top model to wearin a boys tracksuit with drenched hair with a swollen face.

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  14. i dont get y sorcha cudnt use her own passport, why use deenas name? mayb she is illegal. oooo,one chapter divided into two.
    its all going down in st pancras station at 2 o'clock, boi...
    Ryan kill his own baby mum? wat a waste man, then acted suprised, gud actor!

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  15. dis is 2 much, hws evryfin gona b covered in da nxt FIVE chapters??
    we still need to find out...
    1)hu deenas sister is?
    2)wot happened wif smurks/dee
    3)if deena has any STI's (which she must do!)
    4)about the adam/sorcha running away wif deenas identity
    5)about ryan killing diane (and y he did)
    6)we probably need 2 c a return of natalie and chanel (who is suspected to be the sister)
    ...and more aswell dat i cant fink of, hws it gna get dun in FIVE CHAPTERS!!!

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  16. OH NO OH NO
    its too early for all of this!
    this is a passa passa if i ever did see one, the roll deep PAR LOOOOL.
    ryan kille dhis own BABY MUM!
    sorcha mus be nigerian cos uno how they love stealing identities!
    and we still dont know who Deena's sister is, SWEET HEAVENS!
    AND ADAM I AM SORRY- i dont like stereotyping, but you are abig 6ft 5 17 stone collection of chiselled muscle with a big dick- BE A MAN ABOUT SHIT, i hate saying be a man and be a woman etc because i think we should be ADULTS about stuff but ur gonna let deena threaten u like this, C'MON SON!

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  17. i fink ryans got a mental disorder tho-coz he just switches, tru say da males (and females) in dat 'whitley' family r more fuckd up dan deenas pussy!
    lyk he always switches and gets violent den becomes all calm and almost 'angelic' like dat AINT normal! so he probs kills diane den gets all emosh like say he didnt do it himself!

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  18. The Whitleys are fucked, the only sane one is Michelle.

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  19. is diane his babymum!?!?!
    hows he gonna kill his childs daughter!!!

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  20. Jheeeze how u gonna jst cut down the chapters like that!
    and how is everythin gonna b revealed in the next few chapter there like too much to explain in jst 5 chapter JHEEEEEEZE!
    this story is kickin off tho well done to the writer still
    HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!

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  21. childs DAUGHTER? u mean mum rite??

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  22. Nah this is bonkers. If this story ends on a cliff hanger, i'm gonna throw a tantrum lol.

    Why are new stuff still being introduced for? The story needs to start wrapping up cause there's enough unanswered tings ah gwarn already.

    Its too passa passa.

    Nexxttt Chapter please, no short stuffs. thanks.

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  23. omfggggggg!
    i neeeeeeed moreeeeeeeee

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  24. wow...ryan killed diane to take his yout from her i bet! this shizzle is good but these chapters were short man! more please ;D

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  25. gheeez thiz get better and better..:O

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  26. Deaannnneeee :)26 May 2010 at 08:06

    and to think ; i thought adam was the nicest one .

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  27. Ok so basically da chapters are now short ? WDF Lyk 10 lines for da first bloody chapta !!

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  28. that was a short chapter oh well only 5 more to go

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  29. There NEEDS to be more then 70 chapters to dis boyy! There is baree things that are still aren't knownn! I need more man!

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  30. The extra ticket is for Sorcha not deena.
    Hes juss usin Deena's name.

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  31. i bet dianes kid aint even ryans

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  32. omfg, neeeed more!

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  33. I don't understand why Sorcha would need to steal Deena's identity?! Sorcha's such a bitch, she knows what Deena's been through, how things have always managed to fuck up for her..

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  34. AM STILL SITTIN WONDERING WHO DEENA'S SISTA IS ......... TO MUCH THAT IS STILL UNKNOWN + Y WOULD RYAN SET UP HIS CHILD'S MOTHER??????
    LET ME KNOW

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  35. 5 CHAPTERS TO GOO THEY BEST B LOOOONG!!!
    THANKS 4 ENTERTAINING US

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  36. wooow i need more

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  37. yu need to start makin these chapters longa lyk 64 n 65 cud av bin one chapter how is this gnna dun in 5chapters n i swear dnt end this on a cliff hanger coz thts jus jarrin unless yu start doin it frm anuva characters point ov veiw lyk we find out hu deenas sista is n yu do it frm hers so we knw bout her life i cnt believe ryan killd diane :( n hows sorcha gna try steal deena identity kmrt she needs to die tht'll make evrywun happy buh yh hurry up n post em man n LONGER!!!!! X

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  38. i think ryan was tryna kill ..... SORCHA!! Remember sorcha was spose do da ting but she let diane go or she sorcha nu da plan nd let diane go what do u tink guyz ???

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  39. Are you serious? How the hell..? I need more. This story is coming to be like a drug.

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  40. Michellee aint no sane one, didnt you see on rochelle sket and she was like narr i hope that bitch dies in tha fire after all rochelle did for herr

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  41. dis story is 1 ov da best entertaining stories ive read hav 2 give da author props but tru say dem tu chaptas cuda been one in itself im hopin dat the next chapter has 123 parts to it looooool. But i du like how deenas gettin gangsta she shud tear up dem passports coz dey r tryna tek her for sum MUGG!!!! Lool im jus hopin da sorcha finaly gets kill off n sumfin gud happnz to deena for once man kmt,,, roll on part 1+2+3 pleasee!!!!!!!

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  42. Arrrghhh!! Y r these chapters soo short? it's gonna end soon :(, dis shudda jus been one!

    But omg!! Ryan had da audacity to cry bout Diane n shit wen he's da one hu dd it? Fucked up shit fo real? I'm speechless!!

    N hold on? Why dd Adam n Sorcha kno dis? Wow every1 here is 2-faced, actin like dey care wen dey dnt

    It's harsh that Adam's runnin away wit Sorcha of ALL PPL jheeze! Bet she's a bigger sket den Deena n we jus aint heard bout it lol

    madness still ... keep it comin :)

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  43. Mickayla-Rhee **FLYIST**27 May 2010 at 08:44

    This Is Getting Mward Ya Kna. Just A Cycle Cold Hearted Deceit None Stop !! EVERY Character In This Storys Kinda Fuckry In One Way Or Another, Past Or Present.

    Though This Is An Exaggeration Of What Goes On, On The Streets Of London, It Definately Can Teach Little Girls, DONT BE PROMISCUOUS, EVEN IF MAN SAYS HE LOVES YOU!! NATTEN LAST FOREVA' !! CHECK YOUR SEXUAL HEALTH!! MANDEM TREAT GYAL RIGHT OR WE'RE FOREVA FUCKED IN THE HEAD!

    Good One Author/(s) Give Ya Self A Pat On The Back

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  44. Can Sorcha Just Die Plz
    Cuz Unless Shes In Lesbian Mode Shes Just Annoyin

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  45. 'like say I had just told him Roll Deep that if you took the chorus out of Roll Deep's new song, the song would slip down the charts faster than you can say "Channel Aka".'

    LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL its a parr. full on PARR.

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