Saturday 1 May 2010

DEENA SKET CHAPTER 47 PART 2

I cried and hugged her. She held me so tight.
"What are you doing here?", i asked.
She started cryin and said, "I followed you," then she looked at my face,
"what happened to you."

"He hurt me," i cried, "Adam fucked me up."
Sorcha kissed her teeth. "Call a cab," she said, "we're going back to south."
I called a cab and me and her didnt speak the whole way, it suddenly hit me that she might ask why i was with adam in the first place.
The cab stopped at Mcdonalds in Brixton, I paid and we both got out and walked in.
I ran into the toilets to fix my face as she waited.
When i came out, I realized that she had lost bare weight and she looked like she hadnt slept in days.
I sat next to her.
"This place is too bait," she said, "lets go to your nans, do you still have the keys."
I nodded and me and her walked to my nans house. I still had the key, I know that my mum was finkin of movin into it, when we got there there were nuff suitcases in the corridor.
I sat down next to her and hugged her, "I thought you were dead."
She hugged me back and said, "i almost was- i aint shottin again."

"What happened?", i asked.
"You know i told you some time back yeah that i was gonna get uinto somethin, it was shottin, i shot for Murda but it aint shottin dro, its heavy stuff like charlie and meow meow, and erm- yeah basically Natalie's bitch friend Diane shots for him too and he had a big order, so he told me and Di to go together to this yard in west ham cos basically the guys there were some white skinhead bitties," she started cryin, "when we got to the estate, Diane begs me to allow her to go alone so she can keep the P for herself cos she wanted to take her and ryan's yout disneyland, i said kl and left but cos Murda told the bitties that someone called Sorcha was comin, i gave Di my provisional so she could say she was me, because we look the same now cos we both have blonde hair, i let her go up to the flat and waited at the bottom of the estate to make sure she got in ok, twos twos i see them punch her and drag her in, i just ran."

"You know they killed her," i said.
Sorcha started cryin, "it would have been me,"
"Where have you been," i asked, "your mum thought you were dead."
"I ran away cos i thought Murda would fink i jacked his shit but then when i saw someone leave a comment on Di's facebook saying RIP i knew that everyone knew she was dead, i stayed with my dads mum in north, ive only met her twice when i was little but she still recognised me and so i was stayin with her and was gonna go to adam to ask him to call u so u could meet at his yard so i could talk to you, but then i saw you there."


I hugged her.
"Diane's dead," she cried. I hugged her. i didnt give a fuck about diane, i only cared about Sorcha.
"Deena,i was so scared," she said, "diane's son isnt gonna have a mum because of me."

"Its not your fault," i said, "she was bein greedy."
"Nah nah,"Sorcha said, "i shouldve run up to help her."
"How could you."

"Deena, you have to help me go back and see my mum," she said, "ive been to the police station and told them im alive but im scared they might ask why diane had my ID and what we were doin at that estate."

"Listen," i said, "Ryan will sort all that out."
"Natalies gonna be so hurt," she said, "her and diane were close, diane used to be girls with that girl."

"Which girl,"i asked.
"Rochelle."
"Your sister."
"She aint my fuckin sister, she wasnt my dads real yout, MICHELLE is my sister."
She started bawlin and huggin me. She had bad BO, i felt to just slyly spray my deodorant on her.
"Diane's yout," she kept sayin, "whats ryan gonna do."

"how come noone told me he had a yout with her," i said.
She looked at me and said, "diane was a fuckin bosh, it might not even be his."
She got up and dried her eyes.
Then the door bell rang.
We looked at each other.
"Go upstairs and hide in the cloakroom," i said.
Sorcha quickly ran upstairs as i went to answer the door.
I opened it.
"Hello."

"Sorry are you Deena?".
"In the flesh".
"I'm looking for Sorcha,".

"And who are you?".









"I'm her sister, Rochelle."

33 comments:

  1. ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh rochelle is still alive!!!

    thats if it is her!

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  2. ooooooooooooooooooooooooohh shit.

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  3. Loool, 'she smelt of BO'

    Nah u kill it EVERY chapter.
    Keep em coming.

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  4. OMG! OMG! OMG!

    NEED MORE
    NEED MORE!

    AHHH! THIS IS TOOOOO GOOD!

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  5. Loool Alie Da BO Part Was Funny Loooool .. OMDs Ive Been Waitin For Rochelle To Return Buh Now I Need Michelle To Come Back .. My names Michelle Too !! Loool

    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE !!!

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  6. I swear rochelle died inna fire or suttin???

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  7. Whoaaaaaaa that can't be Rochelle...Could it??? I beg in the next chapter you give all the characters a belly washout coz these random farts are starting to become A LOT!! I know there was none of that in this chapter but still...

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  8. MOREEE MOREE MORE!
    This iss siiiick

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  9. SHIZER BOY ROCHELLE'S STYL ALIIVEE !!
    Buh hold onn iimm baffed now whoz Michelle????

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  10. WTF DAT GIRL REALLY HAS GOT 9 LIVES..I SWEAR SHE DIED IN DAT FIRE. DIS IS GETTIN WELL JUICEY I LIKE HOW THE TWO STORIES LINK.

    KEEP WRITIN PLS AM WELL HOOKED :)

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  11. Nomi, Michelles dad, sherice and rochelle died in the flat. Lolsz @ da BO prt. Need mor chaptrs pronto. =]

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  12. THATS PEAK FAM !

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  13. OMFG, HOW COME ROCHELLE IS STILL ALIVE? I'M SO SHOCKED

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  14. Wt da hell, yh ur right she dd die :S...bare confused now wtf...mad twist!

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  15. i fink rochelle did die u knw...monique backed thro da door her gve her a gd beatin nd tied her up nd lft her 4 dead!

    michelle ws da onli 1 dat escped....bruv it's a lot init...gettin emotional

    nxt chapta plzzzzzzz lol

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  16. Alie,Why Are All Dese New Heads Cumin Now ?!

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  17. to those asking who rochelle and michelle are, Shame on you, to understand why sorcha is the way she is, YOU NEED TO READ Rochelle Sket and Rochelle Sket the hidden chapters.
    go the about me page and youll find them both.

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  18. Rahhh Rochelle uno dass deep...Sum ppl need 2 read da ova stories boy 4 reall come on now..Stories gettin peak Next chapter cant wait keep doin wat ur doin (Y)

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  19. wow i fort dat rochelle chick was dead...cnt wait 4 da next chap......wanna c wa a gwan

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  20. u need to read both stories 2 get the full affect of eena sket
    cuz uve onli red wun
    den ur always gonna b confused

    i suggest sum ppl catch up

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  21. Ohh, PEAK!!!
    Nexx one plzz. I'm hooked on dis.
    'xx

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  22. LOL @ "She had bad BO, i felt to just slyly spray my deodorant on her." dass toooo jokess.

    andd OMFGGG rochelle ? it cantt be herr, no wayy.

    whoeverr wrotee diss hass somee tazlentt boyy.

    KMRCT i wanna read moree !

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  23. wens da next wun up....i no its weekend bt like i really wanna no wots goin on

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  24. I Swer Rochelle Died In The Fire .. .

    Nxt Chapter Asap Plz .. .

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  25. Allow Using The Name Rochelle Thats My Name LOL
    Still Rochelle's Alive I Thought She Died Long Time!!

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  26. Omdayys: Still Recovering From Shock!
    At Work Reading This Quite Enjoyable! Ya'Dunoe!
    iLUV Ryan <3

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  27. Omdayys ^^ : iSooo Agrree About Ryan ! <3
    Wen Is The Next Wun?? <3
    And Wot Is Happening To Rochelle??
    iSwearShe Is DEAD!¬¬
    This Is Epically The Best!!!!! <3

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  28. Is this bitch still alive- She doesn't seem to learn her lesson, like she's cursed or something. I don't think she deserves anymore chances, if she screws it up again Smh. I've been reading, waiting for her to catch a serious STI to make an example of her Smh. She makes me sick-
    But the message is good and a lot could learn from it! Smh.
    She better not screw up again Smh...silly sluts living for dick instead of using the brains God blessed them with already, don't care if she smart or not but common sense is wat she shud hav. Smh (Still very addictive, good work)

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  29. OHH MYYY GODDDDDD !

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  30. thats not rochelle i know it aint CANT W8 TO READ NEXT CHAPTER :DDDDDDDDD

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  31. Rochelle !

    LOOL 'She had bad BO, i felt to just slyly spray my deodorant on her.'While the gyals crying yuhnuh, you're hard

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