Tuesday 18 May 2010

DEENA SKET- CHAPTER 59 and 60

CHAPTER 59


"Shit Deena, you fucked Sorcha up too?", he said.
I just started cryin. He was holdin Sorcha's house key.
"You're comin wiv me," he said. He grabbed me by hair, i bit his hand and drew blood, he backhanded me. He kicked me in the face, i grabbed his foot and pulled him down. I went to dial for the police, but he grabbed me by my waist, i fell and my head slammed against the bannister.

Two man ran up in the house and pulled me out of the house. I was kickin and screamin as they pushed me into the black car, the same car i saw earlier, all someone said from their window was "shut up u slag", they must of thought i was jokin around.

They kicked me into the back of the car as Smurkz locked Sorcha's door and ran into the drivers seat of the whip.
I was in the middle of one black guy and Dee who had a big scar on his face and in the passenger seat was one other white bredda and Smurkz was drivin.

Dee slapped me, "long time since i seen you Deena," he punched me.
I started cryin. I couldnt believe this, all this shit in two nights, i wasnt even scared uno, i wasnt even scared, i was jus tired.
"Hows ur man," Smurkz said, "ur boy ryan."

They all started creasin, "Batty boy fi dead," smurkz laufed, "stuck the shank so deep in, the blade broke in his fuckin belly."

I just kept my head down and didnt say nuthin.
"You know what," Dee said, "i dont even fink she's sorry."

Then i looked at Dee and sniggered, "Why are u talkin like Westwood."
His bres started sayin, "ah shes boyin it, shes boyin it."
Dee slapped me and said, "uno what- suck my dick."

He unzipped his jeans and forced my head to his cock, i just put my mouth on it and didnt suck it, he punched my head so i started sucking. His pubes smelled like proper BO, as i sucked, he was writhin and groanin, he was pullin my hair so hard. his boy started touchin my pussy.

The car stopped. We were in some next place, the sun was comin out, "nah nah," Smurkz said, "lets jus go back to your yard Frisky, the suns coming out."

"But i cant," frisky said, "my mums home."
Smurkz kissed his teeth, "alright we'll take her to mine."

They kept on drivin and i thought we were goin to dees house but smurkz must have got a new place cos now we were on the motorway, fuckin pussyhole, he mustve moved cos he was prang after what chanel and her boys did to him and dee.
We on the motorway for ages and then i realized that we were in Surrey Quayes.
The car stopped in front of some any run down estate, Dee pulled me out of the car, imagine this now- i was barefoot in Sorcha's hello kitty pyjamas. they pushed me to some door. Smurz unlocked it and kicked me in. I fell on my face.


They surrounded me, "U look fucked," Smurkz said, "You upset cos ur batty boy man is dead?".
I didnt say anythin. He kicked me in my bum, it hurt so much cos his toe nails were long. Dee dragged me by my hair into the livin room. It was so dirty, pizza hut boxes everywhere, rose bottles on the settee, there were condom wrappers everywhere.

"You aint so big now," Dee said, "Where's Chanel now Deena," he screamed. The scar on his face was so deep, it was like a tumour. Smurkz said, "You're the dumbest sket alive, tru say Dee, she's the dumbest bosh on road, real talk Deena on a level, how many man have u fucked,"

I didnt say anythin. He kicked me in the face, my head felt like it screamin but i didnt make a sound. Smurkz got vex and pulled off the pyjama bottoms and looked at my pussy.
Dee gasped.
"What the fuck happened to it," he said.
It was hurtin, i could feel blood slowly comin out of it.
Then Smurkz grabbed my neck and spat on my face.
"Beg us to let you go," Smurkz said.
I didnt say anythin, he punched me, "beg me!".

I didnt say anythin.
"She finks someones gonna save her," Dee said, "noones not gonna know where u are, that sket Sorcha will fink u jus left her for dead and dussed."

Smurkz laufed, the two other bres were just watching. Smurkz looked so evil, his eyes looked soulless like someone had taken somethin out of them, as he grabbed my neck and found it hard to breathe, he laughed. He was choking me, i grabbed his forearms for him to let go as i was chokin but he laughed, "u like dis u sket dont lie,".

Dee looked away as i choked, i could feel my face gettin red.
"BEG!", he shouted,
I didnt beg. He kept on chokin me and then he let go, i fell on my back and panted holdin my neck, his hands were so strong i could their imprint on my neck, i gapsed for air desperately as Smurkz took off his chain and clothes.
"No," i said.
"Shut the fuck up," Dee said.
I jumped and tried to run but Smurkz threw a remote control at my head, the pain was so much, i fell to the floor and started cryin.
He grabbed me by my legs back to the livin room, my face had bad carpet burn, he looked down at me and said, "Your boyfriend Ryan is the biggest chich on road, i fuckin set him up, that bredda Adam told him he wanted to link him but i showed up instead," he started creasin, "Blacked out, black balaclava, i ghosted him nice, and uno what he said when he realized he had been shanked."


I looked at Smurkz.
He said, "His last words were, Deena." They all started creasin.
"U even got batty bisexuals finkin of u on their dying day," Dee said.
"What happened to ur pussy," Smurkz asked, "why does it look so sore."

I didnt say anythin and then i looked up and said, "i got fucked by your dad innit."
He kicked me in my stomach. I cried out.
"Ive got a fuckin suprise for you," he said, "just wait innit."


Chapter 60

I was cryin out in so much pain, my stomach was painin me, it was like someoned had shanked me.
"Her pussy looks like she got fucked by Mandingo," Frisky said.

"Who the fucks Mandingo," Smurkz said.
"Aww some pornstar with a hench dick."
"Why u watchin nex mans piece for- are you fuckin fruity bruv," Smurkz asked.
Dee started laughin, "i told u from day u was gay Frisky,"
Frisky looked bare upset when Smurkz said, "ur a fuckin bats man- thats the last time i let u watch man beat ever,".
Then Smurkz turned to me and said, "Oi Frisky, Deena wants to take u to get ur nails done."

Frisky got bare vex and didnt say nuthin.
"You and your fuckin snakey friend Natalie, she finks i dont know how she set the whole ting up so chanel could get me yeah? shes next," then he looked at Dee and said, "we should do to her what chanel did to you man."

"Fuckin scar up your face," Dee said.
"Nah nah," Frisky said, "i wanna fuck her."
They all look suprised, "Ur gay doe," Smurkz said.
"Nah nah i aint," Frisky said, "lemme fuck her."

"Alrite den," Smurkz said, "and if u buss within ten minutes, ill fuckin punch u up."
I screamed as Dee held me down as Frisky stood over and dropped his pants. His dick was lopsided, almost like it sleeping on his left thigh. He lay on top of me,he went to kiss me, i bit his mouth. he fell on his back and kicked me in my knee.
He tried to get on top again but i kept movin, Dee slapped me so i would stop and then when Frisky put it in, i did the dirtiest fing ever.

I farted.
Frisky jumped up. Dee stepped back.
"What the fuck man," Smurkz said, "u takin the piss."
He pulled me up and heabutted me, i burst into tears. I couldnt take this anymore, i wanted to die, mybody felt dead as Smurkz started punchin me up,proper fucking me up.

He grabbed me and threw me across the room.
My head hit the wooden table. i felt a splinter in my tongue.

Then i heard someone walk in, "Oi Smurkz u never told me we had dis bitch here."
I looked up.

"Wagwan Deena."

Jesse.

57 comments:

  1. ooooooooooh
    revenge reunion. jesse mus want revenge for what ryan did to him too, actualyly what did ryan actually do to jesse, we know him and fumez and dem lot fucked him and faisani up when natalie set deena up but it never said exactly how they fucked him up. ither way this is sick,

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  2. OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SHITTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!

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  3. REVENGE REUNION INDEED. OH MI LARD, Deena mus be wishin she went back to spain now init.

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  4. looooooooooooool, it just dawned on me, deena is so dumb, when her mum told her to go back to spain, she said "no cos ryans changed," now look, when she could be enjoyin sun sea and sand with aunty mabel (who she fucked over when she didnt tell her that her man was cheatin on her with some french va va voomstress) shes now being kidnapped by all her enemies. LOOOOL. this comes like This is Your Life- the hood edition.

    i shoudlnt be laughin anyway, deena is pissed, OH AND LOOL- her farting to put frisky off of her lool, genius. oh and jesse-please fuck off, u had ur chance to get rveenge on deena wiv cousin faisani now u need to give it arest.
    deenas payin for all the things ryans done to people for HER. what a passa passa! what a madness (eats popcorn and giggles)

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  5. i just had to slap myself! jesse?! that eediat who roles with faisani who tried to rape Deena AFTER faisani did it even though he KNOWS faisani is her cousin, what nonsense is that, i beg Deena start fartin down the place so her toxic ass would poison dese wasteboys, oh and shit, what did chanel do to dees face.

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  6. This is soooo harddd hurrry and make the next chapters girliee !!! :D x

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  7. Too bad Deena, its just too fuckin bad, u c why u shldnt betray ur friends, u c why u should have stayed in spain with aunt mabel? u see!!!

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  8. ryans last words were deena. im shedding tears here.

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  9. LOOOL i love how dis gyal is always fartin up da place.

    Deena's one dumb ass bitch, she shudd jus went back 2 spain wen she had da chance, instead she been fuckin next man N finkin da ryan changed KMT.

    ovbiously going church N moving away WILL NOT change dis gyal ! SO WAT WILL ?!

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  10. revenge reunion OMG ther prob gna kill her .... but dats bare sweet hw ryans last word was deena
    ii need the nxt chapter like now coz ii need 2 read on

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  11. next chapter pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee

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  12. i really cant remember who jesse is someone remind me loool.

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  13. ah shit jesse!
    deena farts too much man. fucking hell.

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  14. yes his last words were deena, but hes stil a dickhed hu used 2 beat her and treatedher ly shit, didnt care wen she got fukd abt by jesse and faisiani! his last words bein deena dnt change da fact dat hes a fuckin wasteman hu deserved 2 die!

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  15. i fort dat dey wud hav killed jesse and fasani
    oh WEll
    i feel so sorri for deena dis is da first tym i actualli feel propa sad cuz i wernt her dat hurt dem it woz sum one else n now shes payin da price.

    awww poor frisky, for once her bowels ave helped her

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  16. Excellent writing as always :)

    Theres so much blame placed on Deena, I actually feel for her. She's been abused by so many people that it has become all that she knows, poor girl.

    She doesn't know love at all, and equates love with good sex because its all she really knows; for instance she said she loved Adam at one point,(Sorcha too) arguably because of his 'big dick', as well as loving Ryan at some points because he could pleasure her. I can't fully remember, but I think she said she loved or 'could love' Smurkz because of his physicality once.

    When people show her genuine affection and care she doesn't know how to handle it so makes them hate her - Rochelle is the prime example, when she didn't degrade/insult/physically assult her she was so confused by it, and became angry. Another example is when she slept with her Aunt's man in Spain.

    She has good reason to be messed up too - the way she was mistreated during her childhood is the cause of her behaviour and self destructiveness.

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  17. jus shouted out loud in my front room oooooooo nooooo omg this is toom much happier endings please i beg this is to much

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  18. its so true, deena doesnt know how to respond to good will and so she goes out of her way to betray those who care for her as a way to create an emotion that she recognises, hate. Look what she did to natalie, and then rochelle.

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  19. hey,, was jesse the guy who raped deena wiv fasani.. i cnt memba :S

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  20. ^^^^^^ yhh he was

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  21. Wooaaah go back to chapta 1 and Jesse is da first boy who's onn dis ting

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  22. oooooooooooooooooooooo seems like she's used to getting raped and punched up by people she thought she could trust!!!!
    keep them comng

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  23. how many chapters left?
    i dont want dis story to finish its jus toooo gdddd!

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  24. HAHAHAHAHA HER FATING SLYLY PAID OFF ISSHH!

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  25. Ahhhh shitt ! I feel forr herr boyy, all getting lickk upp and tingg, she's got caught up in soo muchh mess, boy oh boy if she dontt diee, that will be very shockingg...
    But I gotta feelingg someone we least expect is gonnaa save herr I dnoo why :/
    can't waitt for the next chapterrr, can't take this suspicion of what's coming nextt, ahhh jheeezeee tooo muchhh <3

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  26. life jus gets worst for deena poor ting, she needs a miracle or sumting coz dis one sket cant tek no more beatin n rapin maan,,, dis is wen we need ryan to cum up frm di dead n shoot up alla deese stuuupid motha fuckazz maan, kmt safe for da two chapters doe dt was a nice touch ,, roll on da nxt one

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  27. Ohhh Shettt!!!!! Only 10 Chapters Left JHEEEZ!!!!!!

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  28. I still have faith in deena an if she does survive all these beatings and rape i hope she'll fix up sharp and get da hell out of dat are cuz 2 many people r after her, she should av just gone spain 2 live with her aunty wen she had da chance den none of dis would av happened.

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  29. Smurkz got vex and pulled off the pyjama bottoms and looked at my pussy.
    Dee gasped.
    "What the fuck happened to it," he said.

    THATS HOW YOU KNOW HER PUSSY IS DISEASED STRAIGHT TING... SHE HAS SOMETHING SHES LOST EVERYONE...
    SHE REALLY DOESNT HAVE SHIT TO WAKE UP TOO,
    ALL SHE WAKES UP TO IS COCK AND MONEY MONEY AND COCK. MONEY FROM COCK....
    PROPER SKETELL
    WELL I CANT REALLY TALK MYSELF BECOZ AM NO ANGEL

    she has no class, morals, nor self respect yh your a sket but take shit to a certain exent only dumb hoes go on how she is going on....

    I'm not a hoe but called one and i fuck who i like when i like and suck when i like how i like to who i like but dont fucking go round shaggin tom dick and harry along with their crew of 200 like WTF??!!

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  30. omdiddy revenge reunited indeed....im loving how the story is unfolding....more please ;)

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  31. feel sorry for deena in this chapter :,-(

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  32. So it finished now.......hmmmm dunno what to make of it. Jesse wasn't really that big of a character to comeback, all of them should have come back; Faisani, Jesse, Adam and whoever from her past. However it's been a good read but that farting issue was uncomfortable to read. By the way where is the scorcha read thing you were doing on the side?

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  33. basically deena u are fucked up SNM!!! i feel kinda bad tho dis is like evil minds gettin together for a revenge hus next to come???? and jesse shud allow it his no1..bout comin wiv de talk "Oi Smurkz u never told me we had dis bitch here." !!!!

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  34. LOL @
    "i fuck who i like when i like and suck when i like how i like to who i like"!!

    Raaaahhh, girl aint playin! I gotta respect that. A girl who likes sex aint a sket....but one who has no standards or any type of 'selection process' needs to be kept at arms length...eg 'Deena'!
    Im glad Ryan's dead, for me he had no redeemimg features...so what that his early life was crap? Loads of ppl culd say the same, it doesnt make them all violent cowardly bullies.
    Looks like Deena's actually ready to die, giving up on her life and i kinda cant blame her for feelin that way but boyyy, has she brought it ALL on herself!!??

    Anyways, next chapter today PLEASE!....

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  35. for real tho.. whats up with the fartin???

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  36. :o omggg i feel sorry for her though!
    upload more sooooon!! x

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  37. ahh its to much man post up a couple chapters at a time n longer ones !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  38. Post moree chapters please i keep checkin every minutee i am soo hooked yu are good writer keep it up!

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  39. when iz dah next chapter comin

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  40. O.M.G diss is sum nxt fucked up shit
    i feel it for deena doe she shld of gone back to spain or at least taken rochelles help.
    Im glad ryans dead but jesse needs to fuck off hes had his chances.
    deena will survive shes a fighta
    nd wat is wid da fartin.. gimmie too much jks
    nxt chapter soon please!!!

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  41. Lool =)
    Deena And Her Farting
    Sheit Boyy She Is Fucked!¬¬ <3

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  42. The author needs to allow it, look hw short chapter 60 was, cumon!!!!! please hurry n add more. please please dont let ryan be dead

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  43. WHENSSS THE NEXTT ONNEEEEE???? MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!

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  44. next chapter!!!!

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  45. "i beg Deena start fartin down the place so her toxic ass would poison dese wasteboys"

    loooooool too much

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  46. When will the next one be posted!!! I've been waiting for time!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! :)

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  47. Awww.. i actually feel for this girl, she didn't even intentionally hurt any of these people, yet their all getting revenge on her!

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  48. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL All she does is fart,like some fucking dog.

    Errrhh man she is grim i bet she has blue waffle. O_o ?

    butt roll on chapter 61!

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  49. WHERES DA NEXT CHAPTER ?

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  50. next chapter mayynn

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  51. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

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  52. Iss that it..is der any moree? Cosss imm getttin bored of waiting LOL :)

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  53. WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THREE DAMN DAYS

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  54. She IS ONE PISSEEEEED SKET!.. Ohh Lawrddd

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  55. This is Actually Getting Emosh Mann !
    Theres Actually No One Thats Gonna Come & Help her Now! :/
    how the hell is she getting out of this one ?

    Im still in shock about ryan! ino he was a bats..
    buh he still loved her why did he have to die!
    cant that slyly jus be sum setup n secretly hes still alive pllzz pllz ryan was too smart to die surely hes smart enuf to fake his own death! be alive ryannnn she neeeds uu mannnn!!!!!
    :'(

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  56. Allow Deena man. She's gone through too much. Allow her.

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  57. Omg,
    frum all dese beatings , im suprised deena aint all dissfigured and deformed, sehs been fucked up ALOT boii, dis bitch is gunnarh diee, i feel for her thoo.

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