Thursday 13 May 2010

DEENA SKET CHAPTER 55

Rochelle froze.
Sean jumped up and covered himself with duvet, i was on the bed naked. "Please get out," she said calmly, "please just leave."
Sean tried to beg her, but she looked at him and said, "you can forget about that money you wanted, get out."
"My clothes," he said.
Rochelle walked over to abig black nike bag and threw it out of her window. "Fetch," she said. He ran out of the room. Then she looked at me, i was naked on the bed. i got up and started to put my clothes on.
"You bitch," she said gently, "After everything."
"Come on Rochelle you know tings go on, any smart sket knows never to leave a sket alone with her man."

She looked at me in horror. "God Bless you Deena," she said as i did my bra.
I looked at her confused, "HELLO! i just fucked ur man."

"You're addicted to fuckin shit up for yourself," she said, "you're so used to negative shit that u create it for yourself, i dont care about him, he was only a bit of fun."
I looked at her and got vex, she wasnt takin me seriously , "Your clothes stank anyway," i said.
She nodded and said, "Thankyou,"
I walked to her face and said, "I know you got fucked by a dog." Why werent she reactin. She looked at me and said calmly, "God bless you."
I went to slap her but she grabbed my hand and said, "hit on a bitch who you know can't fuck u up,".
I pushed past her and ran down the stairs with my bag. I kissed my teeth and walked to the station. I was so vex.
I was so vex as i got on the train, i didnt even know why, it was somethin about the way rochelle reacted, like she didnt care.
I didnt even know why i was vex, i was angry and upset all at the same time. I got off the train and changed to the one that went to Sorcha's and when i got there I called Chanel to tell her i was on this ting tonight.
She told me to walk up to the guy in blue shirt and the timbaland boots and that as soon as she could confirm i had done it, she'd send 300 to my account that same night and the rest in small installments so the bank wouldnt get suspicious.
I walked to Sorchas house. When she opened the door, i dropped my bags and we hugged so hard.
I walked in and we were both cryin.
We sat in the front room, "my mums gone to see him now," she said, "theyve removed part of the knife from him,"
I started cryin, "Sorcha, if i tell u this u cant tell anyone," i said.
She looked at me, she looked so tired, oh shit i forgot all about the madness with diane.
"What is it," she said.
"Murda and Damon have been linkin Paula and they're gonna make her do a 50 man lineup,".
She gasped, "wait, who's Paula," she said.
"Ryans sister," i said.
"likkle Paula," she said. she got up and turned to me, "how do u know dis?".
Oh shit, how could i tell her that i had gone to murda to shot for him after what happened with him, diane and sorcha.
"They kidnapped me," i said, "as revenge for bein with ryan and thats when i saw her, she erm- shes scared Sorcha."
She looked at me, "murda is a prick," she started cryin.
"Do the feds know who might have shanked Ryan," i asked.

"All they know is that he was supposed to meet someone in Camberwell and then one guy in a balaclava walked up to him and stabbed him so hard that the handle fell off and the blade-", she started bawlin, "the blade is still in him."
I wanted to vomit, but i farted.
She looked at me and said, "whats wrong with u- what the fuck is wrong with your fuckin stomach, what do u eat?".

"I dont know," i said, "its a problem."
"Well fuckin sort it out, cos we were talkin about suttin serious and it just killed the whole vibe."
I looked down, "Sorcha- can i stay here," i said.
"Yeah yeah sure," she said. I wanted to tell her so bad that I knew who stabbed Ryan but i didnt want to get in any shit, all i wanted was the grand from Chanel and then i could think about where to move, where to go.
I looked at her and said, "Sorcha, so much shits been goin wiv me, so much nastiness, ive missed u so much."
She hugged me and kissed me on the lips. I went to lips her but she pulled away, "not now deena, i have to take a shit." She went upstairs. When i was sure she was gone, i let out some more farts, it stank of old eggs. I fanned my ass to woft the scent away and sat down. I was so worried about my boo, smurkz was such a prick, shankin Ryan. But i didnt even care, once i had the grand from Chanel, i was leavin, i was gonna move somewhere far, i know it was mad- but i was thinkin of Spain, not with aunt mable cos i know she wanted to fuck me up, but i met some man out there who were on me, i could move in with them, i just had to get away before any more shit kicked off.

Sorcha came back down.
"Babes, im going out tonight," i said.
"where to," she asked.
"To see one of my uncles, ill be back here tommorw," i said.
She nodded, she had been cryin, "im gonna see ryan at the hospital now, erm, i dont when ill be back, why dont u come wiv me," she asked.

"I cant see him like dat, seein him lyin dere would make me go mad for whoever did that to him, i swear if i knew who did," i said.

"You know the worst ting is dat ryan had so many people after him, itd be so hard to find out who it was," she said lookin at me.
She put on her makeup and left wearin a black and white cheque shirt tucked into high waisted true religions and black boots. she looked a mess but she was still nang though. her hair was black again and her make up was on point.
She left her house and gave me a spare key.i went up to her room and slept in her bed. I put my alarm on for 7pm and got up. I showered, took a shit and shaved my pussy and armpit hair. I brushed my hair and put in some clip ins in the back, it was chocolate brown to match my hair color. I only put in about 5 tracks and then curled my entire hair and brushed it to give it loose waves. I beat my face with hot pink nude lipstick, smokey eyed ting, mascara and tinted my eyebrows with my brown pencil and then opened Sorcha's bathroom draw and found dark green contacts. I put them in. I had to look as nang as possible for this guy i was gonna beat tonight, 1 grand.
I wasnt gonna wear a bra but i did put on my hello kitty knickers and this dress http://www.asos.com/Asos/Asos-Mesh-Insert-Bodycon-Dress/Prod/pgeproduct.aspx?iid=837565&cid=8857&sh=0&pge=0&pgesize=200&sort=-1&clr=Black
And these shoes
http://www.asos.com/Karen-Millen/Karen-Millen-Extravagant-Frill-Satin-Court-Shoe/Prod/pgeproduct.aspx?iid=1155182&cid=6461&sh=0&pge=0&pgesize=200&sort=-1&clr=Black%2fMulti


I called a cab to take me to Guvnor Bar and whilst in it, i told Chanel i was on my way there. I was so nervous. I had two doms in my clutch bag and was startin to wonder what this guy was, like who he was.
When i got to the bar, there were so many Affs there. I got out of the cab and every man was watchin me, i saw a few girls givin me dirty looks, but i didnt care, i walked in and looked for the guy. Blue shirt and timbalands.

"Sorry can i buy you a drink."
I looked and saw one bashy look alike. He was holding a cup of Dissarano. "Im good thanks," i said.
I sat at the bar. It was so noisy and crowded, so many man watching me. The guy at the bar asked what i wanted to drink and i asked for some hennessey. He laughed and got it for me and said, "you dont have to pay for that,".
"I dont?", i asked, "why?".
"Because the man over there says u can have anytin u want."
I looked over and some guy in a blue shirt and timbs was nodding at me. I smiled and took my drink and myself over to him.
He looked yardie.
"Deena?", he asked.
"Yeah hi," i said.
He was Jamaican, looked about 40, looked like beenie man and movado put together with long dreads.
He bit his fist in his mouth and said, "u a sexy motherfucker."
I giggled.
"Chanel tell u what i want?", he asked.
"She didnt say exactly, but i have an idea." I giggled, but i was fuckin nervous. He whispered in my ear, "suck my dick nice and ill give u 3 grand on top of the one."
I got wet immediately.
"Lets go," he said.
"Where too?",i asked.
"My flat, got a nice place."
I giggled as we left and got into his car. Mercs.
As he was drivin, he kept lookin at me.
"How old are you," he asked.
"18,"
"You know who I am," he asked.
I suddenly got scared and looked at him, "Im Chanels dad."

I started to feel sick and i didnt know why, "she tells me the man dem love you."
"They do," i said tryin not to sound prang.
"You're not goin to fuck me tonight," he said, "ur goin to fuck some of my friends."
"What."
"Im going to pay u 3 grand to take care of some of my dawgs," he said.
I wanted to cry but i held it in, "how many?". i asked.

"3 grands wort," he said.
This guy looked too young to be Chanels dad, "you look so young to be chanels dad," i said.
"thats because i'm not, my mudda adopted her and when she died, i had to look after her,"he said.
"Chanels adopted," i asked.
"Enough about dat," he said, "how good is ur dick suckin."
We got to a traffic light, "its the best," i said.
"Good," he said, "cos ur gonna suck off 30 yardies."

"I cant do that," i said, "its too much."
Then he pressed a button and the cars door lucked. I gulped.
"Its 3 grand Deena," he said. "Here's what we're going to do, all da money is in a bag in the boot, we can go to your house right now and leave the money there so uno its yours and den we go and do it."

"I cant," i said, "i have nowhere to stay."
"Alright," he said, "then gimme ur account number and ill send in installments."
I nodded. I was so scared.
We got to some estate in and we got out of the car. He put his arms around my waist and squeezed my backoff as we were in the lift. We got to the flat and he knocked on the door.
The door opened. the scent of dro hit me so hard. He kissed my cheek and pushed me in gently. there were about 40 man sittin around the flat just bunnin with one hand in their boxers.
They saw me and started sweatin.
"dis our new bitch," chanels dad said, "courtesy of Chanel."
All the men laughed as Chanels dad slapped me. I fell to the floor.
"Dont worry bitch," he said, "ull get ur tree grand, but for dat much money we got to do whatever we like."
They tore off my dress.
"Please were a condom," i said.
"there arent enough," one of the other yardies laughed.
"only pussy os use de rubber," another one of them said.
i was on the floor naked.
"where she from," another one asked.
"half bajan, half turkish," chanels said.
"iranian," i said.
he kicked my ass, "dont matter, by the time u finished, the only ting that will b inside of u is pure jamaican."
I Got up and kissed chanels dad. he started swallowing my mouth so rougly. then he pushed me to one of his boys who grabbed my pussy bare hard. And then all of a sudden, one door opened.
"AH ITS DE YOUNGER ONE!", Chanels dad said. I looked.



Omfg. She walked out cryin and she was naked.
"Deena, say hello to Paula."

42 comments:

  1. sickest chapter.!

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  2. omdzzz shez so fucking stupid! and shes lipsin him aswell aftah hes slapped her to the grounnd! wagwan foh dis girl man??!!! =/

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  3. ooh hurry up n end the story man...........the chapters are dragged on. deena is a tramp!

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  4. it just keeps getting interesting.
    do these things really happen in real life???

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  5. oh my daysssssssss

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  6. Wha de mudda asss!!!!!!!

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  7. i reckon the writers gd in da way she takes notice of wot her readers want-evry1 wanted farts, and deres more farting now.
    i actually LOVE the farting bit coz it brings humour into the serious and dark storylines-well dun writer :D

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  8. deana will never learn boi

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  9. OMDzz!!
    Swearr THISS GIRLL SOMMEE NEXTT EDIIATT...
    BET SHE GETSS PROPER KIDNAPPEDD...MTCHWWWW..
    NONSENSE BITCH

    :D Sick chapter tho.

    MORE MORE MOREEEEEEEEE!!
    XXX

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  10. DEENA U STUPID SKET

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  11. Deena is a foool
    I love rochelle she just kept it moving and
    Just left deena looking like more of a fool

    Next chapter plz
    And can u plz reveal how adam knows smurks

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  12. what is wrong with her.

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  13. omg this bitch is the slags of slags londons bike or mattress fucking hell deena. Is she not scared of aids star.shes had tramps friends dads i think she needs 2 start on animals car she aint human lol

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  14. kill her off!
    she dont deserve to live! im bored of her dick sucking antics...loved the way she got handles by rochelle. when does she have time to shop at Asos and what home does she get this stuff delivered to cos girl cant stay in one place or keep her legs closed for longer than 12 hours!

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  15. this is emotional mayne! keep them comin
    wens the next 1 up?????
    asap pleases!!!

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  16. The storys gettin long
    Wiv da silly 'clifhangers'
    We already know dat paula was gna do dat what's da big deal..
    Hurry up nd end da bloomin story!

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  17. what did i do before i started reading these stories!

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  18. EURGH DEENA ISZ RENK!
    BUH SHE SHOODNT OF GONE TO BEAT THE MAN CAH LOOK NOW SHE GOT DO HOW MANY MEN!
    I FEEL SO SORRY FOR PAULA COS SHE WAS A VIRGIN AND THEESE MAN JUST DEMPOLISHED HER PUSSY!




    HELEN KOROMA AND PRECIOUS ONI SUCK!

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  19. I kinda liked the way Rochelle dealt with Deena for real....she knonws how to play her/get under her skin and piss her off coz she knows the mindset of a sket!

    And how is Deena surprised at how many man she'd have to bang for her grands?...Is she stoopid??....Errmmm, dumb question!

    NEXT!....

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  20. OOHHHHH MY DAIZZZZZ SWEAR DOWNNN
    DEENA NEEDS TO GO SEE RYANN & SHE NEEDS TO STOP WITH THIS SEXIN TING HER WOMB GONNA GET INFECTED

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  21. im loosing faith that she might actually fix up!

    i couldn't have handled an eighth of what she has gone through!

    kmrct!!

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  22. How Tha Fuck Is Paula There !!!

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  23. im so proud of da wai dat rochelle handled her.

    deena's pissin me off.
    evry mintue she callin ryan her boo or her love
    den she goes n fucks adam n is willin to fuck sum random breh.
    shes as bad as her mum.
    n as i said before she is so dumb
    lyk ur realli gunna jus ave sex wid one man den if u giv him brainz hes gunna give u 3 grand,yerrr rite

    p.s dem shoes r ugly y anywun wud pay dat much for dem is beyond me, i dnt care if der designer

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  24. Next Fucking Chapter Man.. I Can't Bloody Wait,, Story Is Getting Sick.. Hold Tite The Writer Your Truly Talented,,,

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  25. raaaah, thats deep famo :R xx

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  26. Deena might as well walk around with a mattress strapped to her back lol

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  27. Hueva is writin dis i rate yuuh sooooo much!
    Dis is soo good mayne! 'xx

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  28. Lol at Deena insisting on a condom. I think it's a bit too late for that darlin! I feel to go back to the beginning and count up just how many guys she fucked you know. Gotta be nearing the triple figures

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  29. "She went upstairs. When i was sure she was gone, i let out some more farts, it stank of old eggs. I fanned my ass to woft the scent away and sat down."

    These lines had me lmao on the train... Tooo funny!!

    Deena has burnt all her bridges now....There is NO hope for her clart...

    Large up Rochelle for showing Deena how wasted she is without sinking to her level...My girl is doing big tings now!!

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  30. one of the best chapters

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  31. AWWWWW POOR PAULA GETTIN RAPED LIKE DAT IS SICK AN SHE WAS A VIRGIN ASWELL.
    I RATE ROCHELLE 4 DA WAY SHE HANDLED DEENA, SHE'S GROWN UP SOO MUCH..AND 4 DEENA AV GIVIN UP HOPE 4 DAT GIRL BY DA TIME DEM GUY'S R FINISHED WITH HER SHE WONT AV A PUSSY NO MORE.

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  32. LOOL she can't stop fucking farting!

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  33. How can you have hot pink nude lipstick?

    And why are people moaning and telling the author to hurry and finish the story cos its long etc etc?? If you're getting bored of it then stop reading!

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  34. Sadé Micah Williams-Rye14 May 2010 at 14:56

    LOOOOL Its Funny How You Showcase The Comments That YOU Wanna Showcase & Not Show The Critisim' Your Getting For All 55 Chapters. A Vast Majority Of People 16+ Find What Your Writting Is Porn Currupting The Youths Them. I Can Hardly Find Anything Positive With This So Called 'Novel'. I Dnt Even Read It My Lil Sis Does & Tells Me All The Narstyness. Have You Thought About The Virgins Who Are Reading This & Their Out Look On Sex? The Twisted Rape Stories You've Come Up With In That Twisted Mind Of Yours? True Say Im A Proud Londoner, But This Aint What REALLY Goes Down. BE REAL

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  35. to the above comment, you hate this story so much that it took you 55 CHAPTERS to realize it, you dont hate the story, you hate the author for being smarter than you, if writing this was easy, we'd all be doin it. and u obviously dont have twitter, cos this story runs it.
    the sex scenes are tooooo explicit tho

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  36. yea this bitch wont ever changes
    shieeeeeeeeeeeet

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  37. I wanted to vomit, but i farted.
    She looked at me and said, "whats wrong with u- what the fuck is wrong with your fuckin stomach, what do u eat?".

    "I dont know," i said, "its a problem."

    Hahaha dis line kills it, intense momemnt den Sorcha calls her out loool nasty bt jokes still

    Dang Deena luvs gettin herself in2 shit, not even sorry fo bangin Rochelle's man either kmt, I dnt even care anymo, seriously, let Chanel's so-called dad do w.e, if she gnna be dumb enuff to say yes to fuckin fo money den she get wt she wnt alie!!

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  38. Deena needs to know that nothing goes smoothly for her, her life is effedddd
    everytime she wants something that she thinks will come easily..things like this always happen..I feel a little sorry for her. She's like a ten year old...

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  39. Deena Is The Dumbest Gyal Around..i Swear She Never Learns!

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  40. Loool...At Her Fartiing!!
    ii Fort Deena Wouldaa Learntt By Noww!!

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  41. Loooool at 'ur gonna have pure jamaican in you by the time we're done'.
    Also at the fact deena wanted to vomit but farted loool fuckin hell

    And as for that dumb long essay from 'Sade Micah Williams'. If you or anyone else doesn't like the story stop fucking reading cha.
    If people are stupid enough to do the stuff Deena does in the story that's their business but the story is not there to corrupt anyone
    Ders explicit stuff everywhere. in music films books etc. If the youts are naïve enought to be corrupted by this story then there is little hope for them in life
    so just shut your shit please,Thanks

    Shit man. People r fully gassed always try kill a good thing. Fuck.

    Keep up the good work to the author

    Don Crystal out

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  42. Denna please please please right more :'( because all these other stories are shit compared to yours and i really need your story its like my drug pleassssssssssssssse

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