Friday, 2 April 2010

CHAPTER 34

Natalie looked at me and laughed.
"Your little boyfriend Smurkz wanted me to tell you he knows that you were gonna set him up," she said.
"He wouldnt," i said.
"Any dumb bitch, i was at aidens party and u saw me three times but didnt even clock it, Sorcha told Aiden that his boys could fuck u as a way of allowing her the money she owed him and she told Smurkz this, then my girl Diane whose linking Smurkz told me all of this shit, so i called Smurkz and set it up, i told him to tell sorcha not to set u up and i gave him the money to give to sorcha to pay aiden back so i could set u up myself afte i fucked it up the first time with jesse and faisani, sorcha told smurkz that you have herpes, so i told the guys to wear rubbers."

Then she laughed. I looked to sorcha and she said, "shes chattin shit, i wasnt gonna set u up,".
I looked at natalie and said, "Ur chatting shit, smurkz wouldnt do that, why would he do that."
"Who told u come here today deena," she asked, "smurkz did, he knew i'd be here with sorcha."
Then she looked at me and sorcha and laughed even harder, "you two are of the dumbest skets Ive ever met, smurkz and dee know everythin, they know all about u linked ryan and fumez after they raped me, they know about how u fucked my dad and they knw that u were considering setting smurkz up for chanel."

"Ur lying," I said, "nah nah, smurkz loves me, he wouldnt."
"Deena," natalie said, "nobody loves you, your mum's a sketty hoe who gets doggied on the regs by old white guys, your dad didnt want you EVEN BEFORE he knew who you were and your nan, some any dumb old lady who still thinks cutting ur hair makes it grow."

"it does make it grow longer!", i shouted.
my high was coming down and i fell on the floor crying.
"sorry," sorcha said.
"fuck off!", i said.
Natalie looked at Sorcha and said, "And as for you Sorcha, your lucky I'm going uni this year cos i swear down, if i didnt have anything to live for your head piece would be cut in half right about now."
I looked up at Natalie and said, "Natalie, why would you do all this shit to me, them man raped me, they cut me, LOOK AT MY CHIN, look at the cut there Natz! You set me up the first time and it didnt work and then u did it again and..."

"You see how much it hurts Deena," she said, "When someone you think is down for you takes the piss and does bookie shit to you, you dont think i didnt cry thinking about what you two did to Sandra and Michelle, you dont think i wish me and u were still girlies."
Then she banged another hole in the wall.
She started crying and screamed at Sorcha, "YOU FUCKIN KNEW RICO HAD MICHELLE AND U DIDNT DO SHIT- SHES YOUR FUCKIN SISTER AND YOU BOTH WENT TO RICOS YARD AND SAW HER THERE AND SAID NUFFIN."
"I didnt know it was her," i said cryin, "i swear i didnt know."
Sorcha looked at Natalie and said, "Natalie, get the fuck out of my house now."
"Or what babes?", Natalie said drying her eyes, "Or what are you gonna do?".
Just as Sorcha was gonna reply, the housephone rang.
we all looked at it. Sorcha picked it up slowly.

"Hello.... hi mum.....erm i'm here with deena.....yeah everything's fine mum....love you."
Then she put the phone down.
Natalie said, "Why didnt you tell her to call the police,"
"Cos im gonna fuck u up and i heard bitches can get sent down for that."
"Is that so?", Natalie said.

"Lets do this like real girls," Sorcha said, "No weapons, just fist to fist shit."
Natalie threw down the hammer.
Sorcha threw down the ice pack. I was just on the floor crying.
"stopp!", i said.
Natalie punced Sorcha. Sorcha grabbed Natalies neck and banged her head against the wall, Sorcha then punched Natalie in the stomach and threw her on to the stairs.
Natalie kicked Sorchas stomach and Sorcha fell back. then Natalie ran upstairs.
Me and Sorcha ran after her.

Natalie ran into Sorcha's room and i ran inbetween them, "allow it," i cried. Then Natalie picked up Sorcha's laptop and smacked me over the head with it, i fell on the bed and my nose was bleeding, i felt like i couldnt get up, i felt dizzy.
Sorcha and Natalie were fucking each other up in the room. Natalie grabbed Sorcha's head and smashed it against her desk and then punched her in the face six times.
I tried to get up but i felt sick.
Sorcha started to cry as Natalie started to kick her in the pussy bare times.
Then Natalies phone rang.
She picked up Sorcha's chair and smacked it around her head, Sorcha fell out of the room.

"Hello," she said picking up her phone, "Yeah come now... come right now....kl."
I looked at Natalie and said, "who was that."
She Smurked.

24 comments:

  1. FIRST ONE TO READ IT GETTIN ALL PEAK AND THAT

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  2. would it be safe to say that Natalies pissed off.

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  3. Lol wow man I was right, Smurkz was involved haha. Truesay he did keep mentionin how he wudda gt duppied if Deena went thru wit da plan wit Chanel. SO he blates knew she was gonna do it.

    Natalies is PISSED! Someone's gnna die soon fo real, too many ppl are after Deena AND Sorcha..now der both 2getha in one house..SHETT MAN! Wonda hu called Natalie...hmm..

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  4. omg this is too much
    i need to know the next chapter
    im dying in anxiety

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  5. OMGGGG IT's baitt smurkzz coming..

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  6. wooooooooooooooow intresting shitt ! ooooo i bet natile called smurkz !

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  7. i new smurkz was a snake...
    i cant help but not feel sori 4 deena and sorcha, dey had it coming, and if its tru sorcha new dat michelle was wid rico den dats reali raw. and deena shudhav clocked wen she went 2 ricos house and alerted sum1-neither of dem hav ne morals.
    btw dno hw much of u realise dat diane hu natalie mentioned helping set up deena, shes in the rochelle sket hidden chapters, she had a threesome wif rochelle and sharice. so deres another interlinking of characters

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  8. I think itz Smurks cause at the end u wrote She smurked lol hope im right ;)

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  9. sorry to say but deena and sorcha have no morals and i think thats what hurt natalie the most, if u read sorcha beat you'll see that natalie and sorcha were almost as close as natalie and deena were and its like imagine finding out on the same day that two people who you thought were your best friends WHO YOU THOUGHT had only met once had betrayed in so many ways but most of all by sleeping with your dad.
    when it comes to michelle, sorcha must have known she was with rico and still said nothing because remember she hates michelle and rochelle for having her dad but if i were her id count myself lucky cos he abused both of them.

    and deena, had you NOT gone to link ryan and fumez AFTER YOU KNEW THEY RAPED natalie, you'd still be in college and still have ur best friend.

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  10. if deena had neva linked fumez and ryan she wud b goin uni (coz she wudv signed up 4 ucas and redone her coursework) and hav natalie still by her side, coz all her 'links' and sorcha and EVEN her mum AND dad, natalies da only 1 in dis story (apart frm her grandma) hus stuck by deena

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  11. Its blantantly Smurkz coming back, Deena is so dumb man bout he loves her kmt get out of here! ITS JUST TOOOO PEAK!

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  12. am i the onli one who feels a bit sorri for deena

    yh she is da dumest sket eva but i fink its cute the she is so naive
    bout smurkz loves her
    yer rite

    plz hurri wid da nxt chapta
    i gotta buttaflies

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  13. lol 'she smurked' loved that bit! deena would trus/sex/love anyone with a pulse! i bet she would still sleep with smurks or even aiden its too sad..

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  14. love it..Love It..LOVE IT!!!

    MORE PLEASE!!

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  15. the whole thing is fxcked up its not even peak no more its straight political, took me 2days to ready all 34 chapters, i give ratings to the person who wrote this.

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  16. clever ending! roll on chapter 35

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  17. Wow some any dumb skets they both had it coming how can u fuck the boys that raped your friend that's badminded rahh boy this is toooooooo much

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  18. This is not my type of story, i never would have thought i would be so intrigued.

    I thought i knew the road, but perhaps i see a different side of it because although i know road guys i have never been treated like these girls.

    I found it so hard to believe initially, i did my research and found out that is is not as far off base as i hoped.

    i guess what u put out is what u get from these guys.

    As for Deena she has taught me a lot, the only thing worse than being a sket is being a dumb-ass sket!
    Ladies this is not just a story its a warning and advice, read it for what it is and wise up.

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  19. omdz iv neva read a hole book in 19yrs bt dis has gt mi hookd!!! i stil havnt read da otha skets but omg im getin mor an mor into it.

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  20. deena fi dead

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  21. natalie i a goon
    I actually ate her for banging up these girls

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  22. 'and your nan, some any dumb old lady who still thinks cutting ur hair makes it grow."

    "it does make it grow longer!", i shouted'

    bwahahahahahaaaa
    dead
    real talk.. It does doe, nah?? :-/

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  23. iM sorry mate natalie is a bitchh for that allow deena

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  24. Ha shes proper upset about the hair growing longer being a myth!

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