Monday 22 February 2010

DEENA SKET CHAPTER 19

Sorcha walked in and gave me one look.
She hugged Sandra.
"Thanks for coming," sandra sed.
"sorcha- u remember deena from the party?", natalie said.
"oh yeah- oh hi deena," she said.
o shit- as far as natalie knew me and sorcha had only met once at her party, she didnt know the shit me and her had been doin behind her back.
"boys lets go up and play on the xbox," natalies dad sed. he picked the boys up, put one on his back and the other on his front and they went upstairs.
Natalie closed the door.
"its alright if deena hears this?", natalie said.
sandra nodded.
what was this about?
"Sorcha- u knw why i called u here?", sandra asked.
Sorcha looked at her and said, "no- no i dont."
I cldnt believe how good sorcha was actin- i had spent the entire day wiv her, we had fucked ryan 2gever, i had vomited in her mouf and she looked so fresh like wed never met.
"You know about michelle?", sandra asked.
"yeah i do," sorcha said, "they found her."
"we want to adopt her- me and natalies dad want to become her legal guardians."
"ok," sorcha said.
"and she's your sister- your dads daughter- we think you're just what she needs- you and natalie are just what she needs- older sisters."

Sorcha looked to the floor and sed, "sandra- i want nothing to do with anything to do with my dad- same way he wanted nothing to do with me when he was too busy raising rochelle and then michelle."

"count yourself lucky," sandra said, "he was a pervert, he abused them both and is the reason theyre both dead- you know about the whole rochelle mix up."

"about her not really being dead," sorcha smiled, "yeah yeah i do."
"i know you're hurt- but sorcha michelle's been through so much, lord knows what that bastard who kidnapped her did to her, once shes finished counselling she'll move here with us and we really want you to be a part of her life."

Natalie looked at her and sed, "she was really good with rochelle and she needs an older sister- thats you"
i didnt say shit- my stomach was hurtin so much i cld feel a spot growin on my face.
"ill need to think about it- this a big thing," sorcha sed.

there was a long silence and den sandra sed, "oh lemme get u a drink- what would u like?".
"im alright sandra- i lost my apetite before i came," she sed and then gave me a quick dirty look.
i was so scared- sorcha was gonna tell natalie everythin.
i sed, "i have to be goin now- i dont feel well."

"oh whats wrong," sandra sed.
"my stomach really hurts," i sed.
"that time of the month," sorcha said without looking at me.
i cldnt believe her- she looked like today never happend, dressed in black and white zebra striped jeggins, a white vest and 6 inch heels.
"i have a hot water bottle," sandra sed. suddenly she looked bare sad as she looked at me, i thrt about her first husband- how he killed that indian girl after fuckin her and den how she would feel if she knew i had fucked her man.
"im ok," i sed, "the pains goin."

i was having a panic attack internally, like i was hyperventilating inside. i felt so sick, my body still hurt and i wanted to jus run out, sorcha was smilin as she and sandra spoke about michelle, like she was smilin cos she could sense my fear and den she sed, "does michelle know her mums dead."

sandra nodded and started bawlin. natalie sat next to her and hugged her.
"that girl has gone through too much," sandra said dryin her eys, "i cant imagine what shes been through, and now that im earning more and natalie your dad got a job in the council we can afford to look after her-we want to move to abigger place in holland park and michelle and the twins there."


then the housephone rang. natalie answered it.
"hi....oh u alrite mark.. yeah she's here... but can she call u back.... alright wha time- alright ill let the boys know... bye." she put the phone down and tld sandra, "it was mark- he wants to take the boys to see Hamleys tommorow to buy them their presents."
sandra nodded, "what time?".
"he said 2 tommorow," natalie sed.

"he must be back from uni," sandra sed.
"yeah," natalie sed.
then jack walked into the room and sat on sorchas lap.
"LAY-TAH jack- u dnt even know sorcha and u sittin on her lap,"natalie laufd.
"i do know her," jack said.
"no u dnt," sandra laughed, "this is the first time she's come here."

jack looked at sorcha and shook his head, "no its not," he sed.
natalie gave sorcha a look as if to say what the fuck.
sorcha started sweating.
"when u went to sleep at aunty sharons house-she came here,"jack said.

sandra gave me a look and then stared at sorcha.
"no jack," sorcha sed, "u mus have me confused."
"no," jack sed,"i saw u- u and boss man thrt i me and jake and i were sleeping- u came here in the night time and then boss man opend the door and then u kissed like they do in the films and then u went upstairs- when mum was at aunty sharons house."

sandra looked at natalie.
"what is he talking about sorcha?".
sorcha got up,"i have to go," she said.
"ur not going anywhere- jack go upstairs," sandra sed.
jack picked up his DS and left.
"what was he talkin about," sandra said. i started sweatin.

"nah nah it cant be," natalie sed.

"Ive been getting wocked out by your dad natalie," sorcha said, "and so has deena."

35 comments:

  1. raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah that is madnessssss sorcha was gettin wokd out by him tooooo!!!!

    this is becoming crazy !!! wonder wat happens next .................

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  2. loooooool the one-liners in these blogs are the one!!
    "Ive been getting wocked out by your dad..." hahahaha

    and mark's back, let's hope he's still a good character!

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  3. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

    Some Any SNITCH lool..

    The Way How My Mouth Hung Open When I Read The Last Bit.. I Cant Stop Laughing!!..

    Why Are Lighties Such HOES?? lol

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  4. Sorcha is a BITCH AND A HALF..jus cz she gt baited she brang deena with her... shes a snitch lol. buh deena brang dis all on herself. i actually feel sorry for her, no one should go through wat she is going through buh boyyy karma is a bitch.. what goes around definetly comes bak around boy x

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  5. OMGGGGGG i got tooo excited over this chapter OMGG!! LOL
    sorcha is a donut though ! why get deena involved rahh !!
    Bring on next chapter
    Im addicted !!

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  6. Omfg this story is getting bloody good man! Keep it coming!

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  7. OHHHHHHHH SHIIIIIIT

    lol Sorcha man ur lettin the mixrace side down.

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  8. i never saw dat cummin i was in pure shock, i guess now that, that secret is out the bag then all the rest will have to follow and natalie is gonna find out bout ryan and fumez.
    poor deena !!!

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  9. OMG.
    this is goooddd!
    bring moree lool:D

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  10. No need 4 da lighties comment-u get promiscuity among all skin shades-dark and light!

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  11. Hold on a minute...how does sorcha know deena got wocked out by natalies dad? Did I miss something here.....or did natalie's dad tell her?

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  12. yeah im sure deena just told her that she's preggers or did i mis-read asweel must go back and re-read but if he told sorcha WAT A DUMB BASTARD and sorcha is a snitch and a half its all gonna come spilling out now

    Good chapter :D x

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  13. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
    Ahh baited out likee!

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  14. Yeah I was wondering when Deena told Sorcha, y wuld she tell nat's friend about wocking out her dad?

    And y is Sandra talking about Michelle getting concelling elsewhere, I swear thats her job, y cant she do it? lol

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  15. I was sweating like Sorcha man :o) That b@#ch is a grass....can't stand people like that....trying to pull others down when they got catch.

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  16. talk bout never trust anyone....n scorcha is a bitch man jst cua she got caught out she fedded up deena....fuckinnn hell

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  17. next chapter plzzz!

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  18. Haha sorcha's some snitch cuuuz

    nd i love da way lil kids tell da truth so innoccently... lil man was happy sayin de wrds der lool

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  19. Kmt Watch When All Of Dem Inna Dis Story Just Die Of Aids....

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  20. Blud, Diis Is Sum Next Madness... Sorcha Is A Bitch Brav, Jus Coz She Been Baiited Out , She Gnna Bring Deena Inna Diss RAHHHHH Cant Wait Too Hear Wahtz Gnna Happen Nexa Bwoii !

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  21. RAAAAAAAAH-TID !!!!!!!!!!!!

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  22. aaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrh sheeeeeeeeeeeeeeet man. peak, sorcha had 2 rat on deena aswell. lil kids are bad man. pple need to be careful wat they do arond kids

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  23. o my gosh o my gosh o my gosh nooooooo

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  24. Fuuckin hell man she was gttin woked to jeehh there messed up fam

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  25. OH MY Daysz
    Skets Deysz days Huh!
    Reading it a bit late but raah diss stuff in harddd!

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  26. jeez shes a snakeee

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  27. what the fuk is the first chapter i cnt find it any wheree onn the internet???

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  28. Raaahh It Camee Out Yuh Shud Nevahh Let little Kidsz See Yuh Cuz Dey Alwaysz Tell Dahh Truth

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  29. For ppl saying all lighties are skets, get yur facts fucking right

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  30. OMFG diis isz gtting rediculous

    sorcha sed daht lyk dere wosz nttn wrong kmt how can dey do daht 2 nataile ineed 2 read more seriously lol

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  31. LOOOOOOOL

    --WOW !

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  32. WHAT A SNAKE! she must feel pissed doe she got baited up by like an eight year ole peak times! someone's gna get fucked up!

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