Wednesday 17 February 2010

DEENA SKET CHAPTER 16

I left college bare early, third period was cancelled so i had 1 and 2 and so went back to nans and jus cotched.
Ms said she had sent off the english coursework and it was a E and i knew i wasnt gonna revise for the exam so i said fuck it, it didnt matter.
when i gt to nans house- she had lef a note saying that she and uncle jason had gone to Leeds to see my uncle paul so i knew they were gonna see my mum as well- knowin grandma there was no way she would risk uncle jason findin out about what my mum had done so i dnt even know why they were goin there cos my mum or uncle paul mite let a slip.
when i gt hme, i got naked and looked in the mirror, i felt sick again and vomited, i was really startin to hate my hair even tho some asian girl on the train said it looked nang.
i logged onto my computer and went onto facebook, sorcha was online.
i messaged her and gave her my nans housefone number, then it rang.

"sorcha?".
"deena- oh ma gosh- ryan told me what happend- dat u got raped- u ok?".
"sorcha- im pregnant and its with ryans baby."
she didnt say anythin and den she said, "meet me at stockwell station- im on the bus on the way there now goin to some cafe."
"then how were u on facebook."
"blackberry."
"oh skeen- ok ill meet u there, but i cant be too long- i have to go see natalie."
"skeen- ok babes stockwell station in twenty minutes."

I was gettin bare self concious about my hair, i brushed it forward bare times and did my eye make up so sick and smoky so id look like amber rose just with brown hair and put on some sexy cherry lip gloss. I put jeggins, black reeboks, a check shirt and with a white vest underneath, i picked up my clutchbag and left for stockwell station.

On the way there, i heard these two girls at the back of the bus sayin, "euuh thats that sket diana- nah nah its dana.... shut up- u dont even know its her- it is her, shes just cut her hair- she must tink shes kanye west girl innit- OI SKET!"

I turned around and gave both of the girls the dirtiest cut eye.
"i know you cant be talking to me," i sed.
they looked and each ova, one was mixrace, one was black, they were in both in uniform.
"yeah we are talkin 2 u- sket, we heard u suck dickfor a living."
some old white man turned and shook his head.
the bus stopped and i stood up, "and what," i said,
they were shockd, "we heard u got batteried 6 in a line- believe thats not a good sign."

"yeah- ur rite- ive been doggied, wocked everyday- i suck dick- lick dick- ride it- fuck it, bounce on it, pounce on it, spin my pussy round on it- what u gonna do about it."
the mixrace girl stood up.
"bitch i beg u take a seat before i have to embarass u on this bus."
the black girl stood up to.
"il take the both of u on- its not even a ting." then i opened my clutch bag and pulled out my box cutter, "my girlies the surgeon cos i can rearrange a bitches face."
everyone on the bus was shook, the girls sat down.
"thats right- and the same goes for anybody who tries to fuck wiv me agen- ill kill u" i kissed my teeth and got off the bus and walked to stockwell station.
when i got there Sorcha was standin there in some sick high waisted jeans- some black and pink Chanel heels and and a black belly top. she looked so cheung.

"oh ma gosh," she said, "u cut ur hair- u look like so sexy."
we walked into the cafe.
we took seats right at the back, the lady came to ask us what we want.
"ill have a spotted dick," sorcha said.
"and ill have a toasted punnani."

the lady looked at me, "pannini?".
"yeah yeah pannini," i said, "sorry."

"deena what happend," she asked.
"some guys pulled me into their car and raped me." i said, i cldnt tell her the whole fing.
"were there dicks nice."
"i wasnt thinkin about that- it was horrible"
"but tru say u like rapists tho- u still fuck ryan and fumez even tho they raped natalie."
i looked to the table.

"you're pregnant u say?", she asked.
"its ryans."

she sighed, "deena when i say this believe dat im not judging you- cos i love a dick in my pussy just as much as any mixraced sket but from what ive heard ur pussy is as exclusive as tickets to a Kano concert."

"how do you mean?", i asked.
"ufuck everyone- ryan sed u even fucked ALL 19 of his boys in a line up- it could be any of theirs."
"what shld i do," i asked.
"abort it," she said , "just get rid of it- even if it is ryans who would want u with a pussy that jus pushed out a fat baby- ur pussys so tight as well- why ruin it and ur figure- ur shape is almost as sexy as mine deena- just abort it."

"how," i asked.
"i know a doctor at a clinic- i got all mine don there as well."
"all of urs?".
"ive had 3 done last year- one of them was ryans, its bare easy- itll just bleed out of u."
"im scared," i said.
"ill come wiv u for moral support then we'll go and see ryan and fumez- ryan feels bare guilty for not helpin u- hes such a bitch when it comes to fumez."
"what."

"ryan didnt want 2 help u when u called him cos he was in the middle of snortin lines off of fumez ass- i swear down- they fink they aint gay but theyre gay as hell- dey even beat up some guy cos dey said he acted like a chick when DEYRE da ones that back each other brain- road mandem- people fink they aint on that shit but theyre the worst."
I looked at her, "the ting wiv the abortion will be fine," she sed, "in fact lets go see ryan now- i wont tell him ur pregnant."
i nodded.
me and her caught a cab to ryans yard.
she called him and he came down to meet us.
he hugged and kissed me and sed, "sorry yeah- i should have helped u."
i kissed him and sed, "its cool."
thenhe squeezed my ass and sed, "come the three of us do a ting wivout fumez like in my yard rite now." me and sorcha smiled.


when we got into his house we sat in the couch.
"deena u c that bre whose house we went to that time and he lived with the little girl who i said wasnt his real sister," ryan said pourin sorcha a drnk, "he got arrested in france trying to sell her and drugs- it wasnt his sister- he kidnapped her."

"oh shit i heard about that," sorcha said, "when the dumb fed handed the little girl over to him cos he sed he was a social worker."
"dum feds," i sed.
"oh shit deena- u cut ur hair," he said.
then he started bellin up and he touched it, "shit what am i gonna pull now- but man cant even lie- its- its nang," then he kissed me.
"can we suck ur dick please," sorcha asked.
he took his tracksuit bottoms off and that familiar dick was in my face.
i looked at the time, i was supposed to be at natalies future step mums party but i needed a dick in my mouth.
sorcha grabbed the back of my head and forced it onto the dick.
i sucked it slowly at first, then i did my tongue and ball trick, i took the dick down my throat and then stuck my tung out so as i was deepthroatin him i was lickin his balls,.
he was cryin out- he was so sexy when he was gettin brain.
sorcha started lickin his balls and then went behind him, as i sucked his dick- she licked his ass, i wanted to vomit at the thrt of her tongue flickerin over his asshole, but i didnt- i just kept on sucking.
"if i fuck ur mouth anymore- ur face is gonna get stretch marks," he said as he started bangin my face.
sorcha came round and kissed me, i could taste ryans ass and then i vomited, all in sorchas mouth.

she screamed and punched me and ran to the bathroom.
ryan fell on the floor laufin so much that his eyes were watering , i wiped the vomit off my mouth as i heard sorcha screamin.
"did u do that on purpose," ryan laughed pulling his bottoms up.
i shook my head, sorcha walked back in, "ur fuckin dirty deena- ryan im going." she got dressed, left the flat and slammed the door.
he laufed, "deena get in the shower, brush ur teeth- use the blue toothbrush and then come to bed- i wanna talk 2 u."
i did as he said.
i cried in the shower- thinkin about the baby, and my mum, natalies dad, jesse, faisani- just everyfin.

i got out of theshower, dried myself and walked into his room, he was on the bd bashin. i lay next to him, i rested my head on 6 pack and let him cum in my mouth and on my face.
then we got under the cover and i rested in his arms.
"ryan- can we talk about u and fumez."
"gwan."
"r u gay."
"deena what the fuck- i already told u aint no chich yeah- i just dont decide who i want to do tings wiv based on sex, if ur sexy u can get it, dont matter if u got a piece or a pussy."
"isnt that bisexual."
"no it aint- cos dat means i like both- as in i like man and gal, no i just like what i like innit- it aint based on man and gal its based on pengness- i beg u drop this shit."

"i heard u fucked up some guy in front of his maj cos he acts like a chick."
ryan laufed, "yeah yeah me and the mandem."
"isnt that hypcritical- beating someone up cos u think they act gay when ur an example that shows that there isnt a way you can act gay- ur a guy on road- u shot- u fuck chicks but u still suck dick- tru say that proves there isnt a gay way of acting and that jus cos someone acts feminine dont make dem gay."
he kicked me off the bed.
i fell on my stomach.
he got off the bed, grabbed my neck and slammed my head into his drawer, i felt splinters in my cheek. i tried to run but he punched the back of my neck and den he kicked me in the stomach, six times.
i felt on the floor and started bleeding from my pussy. he kicked my face bare times, i grabbed his foot and tried to push him on the floor but he picked me up by my neck and threw me out of the room and then he did it.
he got my fingers and put it in the gap of the door , i tried to move them but it was to late, he slammed my fingers into the door, i screamed for help but he kicked me in the mouth as my fingers started to bleed and then picked up his xbox and held it over my head.
He dropped it.

39 comments:

  1. Oh Gosh "/ Fell On Her Belly && Started Bleeding From Her Vag Looks Like Theres No Need For An Abortion.

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  2. this is crazy!!!!!

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  3. First Yeaah x

    Allow It Mayn x This Chick Shuld Just Run Away xc

    trust This Baby Is Either Dead Or Disabled x

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  4. Woop first comment!! Vomiting in da gals mouth nasty but Ryan is a bitch and a hyprocrite, and your baby!!!!! Hope Ryan gets exposed

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  5. WOYYY FIRST COMMENT!!!
    rahhh ryans blatently bisexual
    chat bwt i just like peng ppl
    :/

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  6. rah man. Ryans a prick!

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  7. wtf who hits a girl like that its just not nice, hiting a girl doesnt make you a man, it makes u a pussy cos u cnt take ur anger out on any1 else

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  8. omdz he broke her fingers in the door dats just cruel just cuz she is statin da obvious.
    Omdzz is she she gonna die, nope den der wud be no storri !!

    its funni how evry body is lyk wahoo first comment wen ders like five people infront of them.loll.

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  9. she talks too much cha!
    buh still shes sayinn the truth styl
    goodd story:)

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  10. wat a pity man she should go to the doctor nd check if tht baby's stll existing man and ryan is suuuch a prick why u guna say its baseed on pengness poor girl was just stating the obvious but she is a bit stpid for bringin it u again. lool made me laugh when sorcha labellde herself as a mix-raced sket good chapter xx

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  11. Why the fuck do u lot keep sayin 'first comment' Erm dont you realise the comments have to be approved before they show up? So people have obviously read & commented before that. And wats the big deal about bein first anyway?! Dickheads.
    But yea that was fuckin disgustin when she puked in her mouth, that crossed the line man. Ergh.
    And ryan is a prick. Why is she still mashin him tho after how he treated her before, then didnt even say sorry and try make it up to her til she went to see him. Dumb hoe.

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  12. cant believ hw dumb dis girl is-y even botha wif ryan let alone bring up the gay stuff again!
    she shud hav...
    1) sorted her education
    2)abortion
    3) got tested for sti's
    4) dashed all da waste ppl she hangs wif (ie. ryan, fumez, sorcha etc) and just gone celibate for a while! i mean dis girls startin 2 annoy me just a bit (still luv it) simply coz unlike rochelle she dusnt seem 2 learn frm her mistakes and wna beta herself!

    good work tho!!!

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  13. could this get any deeper! ryan is ban=dmind, I hope she leaves him! ...if shes sy=tillalive that is! ....more please!

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  14. Lmaaaoooooooooo....this shit is toooo funny meehn...if sorcha can like batty where shit come out of why she nah like throw up in her mouth dutty gal..n do u no wat the joke is? You know this fool deena is gonna run back to this chi chi pussy licking man ryan...o_oCrazy...

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  15. Have u noticed somethin- anytime deenas supposed to spend time wiv natalie and she doesnt somethin bad happens to her, deena in my opinion is just blind cos natalie is such a good friend- always wntin 2 be there for her and natalies got her alevels sorted innit- shes goin uni but deena dont even knw where shes goin tommorow.
    the fing is wiv deena is dat what she was sayin about ryan was true about him being hypocritical for beating up a feminine guy when ryan himself knows (becos he sucks dick) that jus cos someone is feminine doesnt mean that theyre gay

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  16. Deena needs 2 sort her fucking life out .. come on man

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  17. kum on nw ryan nos hes bi but jst dnt want 2 addmit it....the mad thing is deena gos bk 2 him afta hes parred her off.....wot a fuckin jker mann lowwweee etttt if i woz her i wud jst move 2 nxt country n start a fresh(not as a new sket) and hav a NORMAL life.....she shud do tht get a(new) life.

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  18. after everything she still wants cum in her face kmtt

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  19. haha.. boy must b gay.
    he goes droppin his xbox!!

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  20. JHESZZ!
    the last bit is EMOSH!
    low the xbox on her head. Is he ok?
    Yii.. buut she's a griim
    SNM.
    --- L.b

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  21. Nahh this is just too out of order

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  22. this gurl is jus so nasty wen she gets in da moment boiii she had sex wid her uncle shes sick boii who ever wrote dis day get all of my ratings boii all i have to say is WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW

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  23. Sorry but dis girl isss NASTYYYY !, ryan iss blantenly a batty bwoi but man is there deniyin it n takin it out on her , and HA as for that baby no need for an abortion datz bin dealt wid already probali forr the best .

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  24. arrr dhats baree deep , the way he abused her at the end ya'noo, gurl is mad for gain back tuu ryan kmt he left her jheez nd didnt care wen she got raped kmt !!!, arr diss is sad boy

    nd her baby is dead mate !

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  25. ryan is soo gay. deena needs to stop fuckin with him. he cant treat her ryt, cant stand up 2 fumez n beats her lyk dat.wft?

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  26. RASSSSSSSS! that is soooo bad I mean Wow

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  27. yo i dont even eel sorry for her shes a dickhead, she needs to sort her life out ud think shed learn that he was a prick from d time she got raped and he nevah came. and den she came to suk his dick lmao, na dis aint even sket dis is takin shit to next levelz

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  28. ryan is a idiot. of course he is gay i haaate hyprocrites grrrrr

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  29. aww i feel so sorry for her ryan is a total dick!!

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  30. BLUDD. Shes a SKETTT FAMM.
    but real talks i wanna meet dis gyall Styll.


    Why dar fuck do ppl get happs for being the first commentt. JHEEZEE MANN.

    this storyy getss me hornyy blud. any1 wanna link hollaa.

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  31. oh my god -
    I would hate to be her -
    I am acually loving this tho-
    and corr ,
    she does sound PENG : )
    x

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  32. WOAH THATS BADDDD

    no need for an abortion now its dead

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  33. OMG IS THE XBOX OKAY ??!!

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  34. I absolutely love it but if a guy wants a girl to lick his ass out, does that make him gay?
    (generally speaking)

    out of curiosity coz my friend told me her man wanted her 2 do dat loooool.

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  35. Thiis iis Justt Too Muchh ! Keep iit Cumiing. Ryann iis A Topp Priick And Thee Giirl iis Deep. She Lashedd Herre Evenn Thoughh Shee Kneww Shee Was Pregnat.

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  36. arrrrgh how can u vomit in someone elses mouth :@
    that deena is a sket through and through....
    why do she get the coil or sumink shes just duutty im suprised she aint got AIDs
    &&ryan needs to allllow himself..."i aint gay it about the chungggness it dont matter if day got puussy or piecee...." dead!!!!!!!
    But i must admit thiss is a guud readd like reallly goood xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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  37. ryan = c u n t.

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  38. omfg,dis baby is gonna cum out 2 b sum next up retrd or its dead

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