I got to Bow Station at 12.35.I was dressed in a tight blue t-vest, high waisted jeans and blue aiforces and bare bangles.
I was waiting outside the station feeling so NICE, bare heads were clockin me as i put on my pinklip gloss waiting for Fumez.
Then he came.
Tall ting- deepwaves in his headpiece, nice white teeth,big chest and a tatoo of a strap on his neck. He was in a Ralphie polo, baggy jeans and airforces too.
"Deena?", he said,"where's natalie."
I smiled and said, "she aint comin."
his face looked vex, "she fuckin set u up- she knows what we do to bitches."
"I know," I said,"itold her i was here to set u up for what u and ur boys did to her."
He looked at me bare strange,and said, "you wanna get wocked out by the mandem yeah?".
I nodded, he burst out laufin and said, "kl kl- yeah i can make that happen."
Me and him started walkin towards his yard. We got to his estate and dere were bare youths on bikes riding around jus not doin shit as if today wasnt a school day. then me and him got in the lift.
"dont tell natalie i actually came here- ill just tell her i didnt go thru with setting u up,"i begged.
he nodded and started lookin at ma tits and backoff, "shes some bitch man- she knows she was enjoyin it."
i smiled and said, "i'll be the judge of that."
he unlocked his front door and when he did the scent of weed hit my nose, i coughed.
he locked the door behind him and we walked to the front room-dere was about 19 man allin the front room playin xbox.
when i came in- they alllooked up and were like "chayze!!!".
I laughed.
"Dis is dat hoes bredrin innit- she wants to see how we get down,"fumez said.
all of the mandem looked confused, about 10 of them were cheung- the other 9 were butters.
there was one that looked like griminal and i wnted to do him first.
"You lot can do WHATEVER u want to me-" they allstarted lookin shocked,"but i wanna choose who gets to do it."
they looked at fumez and couldnt believe their eyes, "is this somejoketing," one of dem asked.
Fumez laufed,"bruv shut the fuck up before she changes her mind."
Then he grabbed my backoff and said, "where u from."
"my mums Bajan and my dads Iranian,"i said.
"what so r u muslim?", one of dem asked.
"Nah- i never met my dad, he left before i was born."
"WASTEMAN!", Fumez shouted. we allstarted laufin.
"uno who u look like,"Fumez said,"you look exactly like that bitch who fucked ray j."
"oh who Kim Kardashian- i love her," i said.
Then Fumez started kissing my neck, "choose two man to come up with us innit."
I looked and pointed at the one that looked like Griminal and one SEXY arab one.
We went upstairs to what i think was Fumez's room cos i knw he lived with his older brother.
i took off ma clothes and lay on the bed. Fumez and his boys took off their shirt and Fumez started fingerin me. now i was sittin on the edge of the bed and he was sittin on the floor with his fingers in my pussy whilst the arab one was sittin behind me with his dick against my ass suckin my neck whilst the griminal lookalike switched on the internet and put on someporn of some light skinned chick with pink hair fuckin some blackguy.
"bruv- look how wet she is," Fumezsaid.
i laughed as the griminal look alike whose name was Ryan started lickin his lips, "after we finish wiv u- how many moreman can u take," he said.
"8 more of the cheungest ones,"i said.
fumez nodded.
the arab one that lay me down and sat on my face.
"suck my dick," he said. his dick was thick and a giant head.it mustve been about 9inches.
"swallow it whole!", ryan said.
i took a deepthroat and let that dick run all the way down to my throat. the arab guy started goin mad wiv pleasure, he kept sayin,"im pokin her fuckin tonsils bruv."
fumez and ryan started bussin up.
i felt fumez dick in ma pussy.
"at least dis hoe aint actin like she aint on it, natalie knew she was on it from when she got here, about we raped her," he said.he started bangin me and as he did,i could smellsomethin really strange.the arab guy had just done a silent fart and it was goinrite intomy nose.
he looked down at me as if tosay "dont say shit,"so i jus kept on suckin.
fumez was fuckin me and cos the arab guy was sittin on my face with his dick in my mouth i couldnt see anything in front of me,only to the sides, which on the left was the wall and on the right the laptop.
and all of a sudden i could hear lips smackin together.
at first i thrt it was the porn but it wasnt cos in the porn the bitch was getting fucked- she werent kissin nobody and then i looked up at the arab guy who was lookin behind himand smilin.
omfg.
omfg.
omfg.
then i saw Ryan get up wipe his mouth and say to the arab guy, "let me have a turn."
why the fuck did he just wipe his mouth right after i heard two lips kissin. i was the only chick in the room as well.
ryan sat on my face and said, "swallow my dick and balls at the sametime."
that wasnt gonna be hard cos his dick wasnt big at all- about 6 inches,so as i was swallowin his dick and balls,i felt Fumez get up and the arab guy start fuckin me.
then fumez walked over to me and spudded ryan, then fumez said, "close ur eyes," so i did and then i heard that kissing sound again, now fumez had his hands over my eyes and i could hear two tongues smackin against each other and ryan going "hmmm."
omfg
omfg
omfg
omfg.
just as i was about to say "EUUH WHATS GOIN ON!", i feltmy self about to cum and i did.
the arab guy screamed and he bust all over my stomach. fumez took his hands from my eyes and started fuckin me agian. i looked up at ryan who was lickin his lips. his ass was on my neck.
fumez dick was feelin so nice,it ws hittin the right spot and he started goin superfast. ryan got off of me and left the room.
fumez and the arab guy were now takin turns to fuck the shit out ofmy pussy, "alie this pussy is deep," the arab guy said.
fumeznodded as he watched his boy wock me out.
then he picked up a bandana and told his boy to blindfold me.
"why,"i said.
"its fun,"fumez said, "oh shit- dont ask me questions!".
the arab guy blindfolded meso tite.
and then i heard footsteps comin up the stairs and then bare on me.
and den i could feel the breath of all 19 of dem breathn on me.
i felt a dick come out of me and a hard coarse one go inside.
i screamed. it was so horrible and den i felt one in my mouth and den i was turned around.
"not in my ass,"i said.
someone punched the back of my head and forced their dick into my ass.
i screamed as i felt blood comn out.
alli cld hear was laughter as i could feel dicks being bashed off over my back and den i could hear bare kissing.
omfg
omfg
omfg
omfg.
den i was turned on my back and kicked off the bed.
i fellto the ground and felt peopleall around me.someone picked me up and was holdin me as guys were takin turns outbangin the shit out of me. theperson who ws holdin me forced my mouth open with their tongue and flemmed in my mouth then they pushed my headback so i was forced to swallowit.
and then i heard one one of them say, "BLACKBERRY BEAT."
I felt a blackberry being inserted in my pusy.i started cryin cos it wouldnt fit but was beinpushed in.i heard bare laughin and den i screamed as i realized the entire fing was in my pussy.
"squeeze itout,"i heard fumez say.
i was pushin so hard that i farted.
i heard them all say euuuh. i got punched in the head and thrown to the ground and den i felt people bashin over me and den it happened.
"AHH"
"AAHAHHH SHIT"
"AAAHHAH BRUV- IM CMIN"
"OHHHAHAHHAAH IM GNNA CM."
Cum was all over my body. in my hair,in my mouth, on my skin,on my tits, on my everywhere.
den someonestood over me and farted.
"HAAHAHAHA- were gonna have to give her a shower."
"nah nah allow pissin on her man- dats goin too far," i heard ryan say,then i hear dhim say, "are we all donehere?".
then i heard all the guys say yeah.
i was picked up carried out of the room and thrown into my bath, i took off the blindfold and saw ryan stndin over me, he put on the shower as alloff the naked man demwalked in.
the shower was warm as ryan started cleanin me.
"ryan likes her bruv," one of da butters guy said to fumez.
i started cryin and den fumez,"i bg someone stick a dick in her mouth- dis is what she asked for alie."
my ass was bleedin and was so my pussy. i cld still feel the blackberrys shape in me.
allof the guys watched as ryan started scrubbin me down wiv a sponge and soap,"bruv thats my sponge," fumez said.
"ill buy u anew one," ryan said.
this was so weird.
then allof the man left exceptfor me and ryan and then he kissed me and said, "ur my wifey now."
i didnt say shit and stepped out of the shower. he dried me wiv atowel and gave me my clothes.
"getthe fuck out of here," fumez said, "and tell ur friend natalie her pussy is shit compared to urs."
"please dont tell her i came," i begged.
allof the man started creasin, "alrite- if u come here once a week for da same ting we wont tell that u asked to get gangbanged by us."
I nodded.
then i left the flat and held back my tears until i got back tot the station. i looked a mess, my face was bare cos ryan had washed of the make up and my hair was bare frizzy.
i got on the train and just cried,i didnt care about the people on the carriage wachin me.i cried.i cried all the way back to my stop.
Thursday, 21 January 2010
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Loooooooooooooooooooool...this hoe had it coming boi but oh my days its soooo funny wen she was like he looked at her as if to say don't say shit wen he farted lmaaooo...but I swear its too similiar to rochelle sket?!
ReplyDeleteLMAO LMAO, Fumez and his mandem were kisisng each other,LMAO LMAO LMAO. serves deena right- who in their right mind asks to get gangbanged by rapists,i mean shes lucky they didnt kill her.
ReplyDeletewhen the arab guy farted i just had to laugh and fell off my seat imaginging the look he gave her when he waslookin at her as if to shut her mouth, LMAO
this writer has a way of writing subtle comedy into darkness and terror, do u know how many jokes i caught from rochelles most tragic scenarios.
DEEP story.lol.
This story is deeeeep! Deena has proper issues.. hows she going to sex rapists??? I'm tryin get with the LDN slang: Blackberry Beat, Jungle Beat, Slag Beat LMAO I beg someone tell me what 'the beat' is!
ReplyDeletePlease tell me people dont do that "blackberry beat", SMH
ReplyDeleteAnd y was everybody farting all over the place man??
boi... move like a junge and all dat... Who the fuck asks 2 get gang-banged anyway??! Ppl treat u how u treat urself str8.
ReplyDeletewait a minute, so fumez and his boys kiss each other and they put a blackberry in her unowhere.
ReplyDeletedeena has mental issues, shes not a ho but needs psychiatric help because natalie TOLD HER they did the same thing 2 her and deena wanted it to happen 2 her.
and there must be a big flatulence problem cos everyone keeps fartin
hahahahaha sickest story eva ! an i mean it made me sick...dunno if deena needs sum kind of help but i think getting gangbanged just shows the company u keep and the ppl u have around u hahahahahaha ....she needs 2 rass slap yes
ReplyDeleteThe fact Denna was acting like she was gonna get them back for what they did to her friend and all she wanted was sex from them! KMT, she deserved what she got man!
ReplyDeleteAll i have is three words to say.....
ReplyDeleteDEENA NEEDS HELP
end of !
TBH I think Deena wanted it to happen to her because she's jelous of The way baree mans beat Natalie and not her so she wanted the samee... ?
ReplyDeletewoooow!! She has LOST it now!!! She deserved that tho...Who is gonna ask to get gangbanged?! She's sick in tha head! Lol I wasnt expecting fumez and his mandem to kiss each other....
ReplyDeletedeena is mad man who in their right mind would want to get gangd bangd kmt stupid girl and allow gettin fuked by blackberry i swear sme1 is still gonna have to use it xxx
ReplyDeletePing ping PINNNNGGGG....hahahahhaaha
ReplyDeleteThis is such a sad thing to happen to a girl... a girl who has a bright future ahead of her.
ReplyDeleteReevaluate yourself girl. You are worth more than this. Why must you do this?????
Dont you know GOD loves YOU?
Raaahhtiddd
ReplyDeletethius story is harddd
sum deep shit tho still!!!
wtf is wrong wid deena?
gyal is askin to get raped!!
SHE IS AN IDIOT! snm.
ReplyDeletePlzz tell me wtf is wrong wiv this girl...she baisically asked 2 get raped n beat up....did she nt fink 4 a second tht they wud do the same 2 her as they did 2 her friend DUMB BITCH!
ReplyDeleteLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLOUDERTHANLOUD!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Dem Battyman Suspects der!
ReplyDelete@ brownie gwarrrrn! no way this girl got issues! but i still reading
ReplyDeletehahahahahhahhahahaha
ReplyDeleteAnd why did Ryan Wifey Her ??
ReplyDeleteShe is Dumb. how is she asking to be gangbanged after she heard what happened to her friend??
ReplyDeletethats pissed she got wat she deserved....
ReplyDeleteshe iz jus toooo nasty
thats dread what they done to her but come on ber man in a yard who in their right mind would stay after a friend warned them idiat ting
ReplyDeleteGUUUUUUD TUUU BLUDCLART NUFFF GALL ! BWT SHE WARNN GANG BANG .. DICKHEADD
ReplyDeleteWHY THE HELL IS SHE GONNA DO THAT?! THEY SHOULD BE BANDGGGEDDDD UP FOR WHAT THEY DID TO HER MATE! NO OFFENCE GIRL BUT YOUR A FUCKING CRAPP FRIEND!
ReplyDeleteLMAO blackberry beat omdzz that is just nasty who the fuck would do that put ur phone sum next gyals pum eeiiishhh!
ReplyDeleteThey looked at fumez and couldnt believe their eyes, "is this some joke ting," one of dem asked.
ReplyDeleteFumez laufed,"bruv shut the fuck up before she changes her mind.
Looooooooool
Dumb bitch That's some mix race bennie behaviour
LMAO AT BLACKBERRY BEATTTTTTTT
ReplyDeleteREAL TALK THO SHE FUKD IN THE HEAD LOL
gyal gone got brukked up
ReplyDeleteLOOOOOL OMDZ DERE GAYYY LMAOOOOOOO
ReplyDeleteLOOOOOL SOME NEXT UP GAY MAN DEMZ BANGIN HER LIKE HAHAHAHAHHA DATS JOKES MAN!
ReplyDeleteDeena needs to get her mind right.. but funny at parts.
ReplyDeleteWooow she's actually go back
ReplyDeletewdf thats jus fucking WRONGGG
ReplyDeleteErr Man Bb iiN Herr Pussyy Thats Carneyy !!
ReplyDeleteFrom Jm
Looool Peakkk
ReplyDelete